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[Repo Man]

Nick has to do one or more crew-on-one fights. It could be Rockers, ending with beating up Kurt (that wouldn't be a real boss fight, because I think Nick would kick Kurt's ass any day). The fight should be one-sided, which means Nick should beat them all pretty bad (maybe in front of students too).

[BloodChuckZ]

Let me understand this.....You want Nick to take on an entire Clique ?

[Repo Man]

I had this idea...somehow, in Chapter 5, Derby finds out that Hattrick's House is Rocker hideout and that Pinky's with them. He pays Nick to go there and get Pinky, and he will be involved in a fight, in which he kicks everyone's ass, plus Kurt's ass too. He kidnaps Pinky and brings her back to Harrington House. Jake then approaches Kurt with a request to help him take over the school and take Pinky back.

[BloodChuckZ]

Well....No.   Derby already knows about the Rockers and Hattrick House, and that Pinky is there.  In fact, he has made a reconciliation with Tad and the other Preps for the sole purpose of attacking the Rockers at Hattrick House and trying to steal Pinky back. 

Bif has made Christy his girl with the aim of getting some 'Inside Intel' on the Rockers and Hattrick House, since she is Pinky's friend.  And the Rockers are keeping track of Derby's plans via the hidden Walkie-Talkie planted by Jake, since Benny now has a receiver capable of picking up the signals.

So, the attack will happen soon. I won't reveal the outcome here, yet.  Don't want to spoil the surprise.

[Repo Man]

Alright, fine. Only, I think it doesn't sound realistic as a bunch of arrogant rich kids usually would hire someone to do the dirty work for them, rather than spill their blue blood and filth their clothes. But, the story goes as it goes so ok.

[Repo Man]

A suggestion: change the name from "The Bullworth Never Ending Story" to just "The Never Ending Story" and it will get back to its original name!

[BloodChuckZ]

Mercury and I had a talk about this awhile back....The name "The Never Ending Story" is the title of a book and 3 movies that have nothing to do with Bully.  It is also a copyrighted title.  If one were to Google 'Never Ending Story', all the references come up in relation to the book and movie, and none come up regarding Bully or Bullworth. 

Our original intent was to provide a portal for readership via a Google search.  It does no good to have the best and longest Bully FanFic if there is no way for anyone interested to read it.  Mercury wanted to change the title awhile back, but feared he might somehow affect the thread.  When I re-organized the section this past week, I was able to go ahead and change the titles.  We still want to have the 'Never Ending Story' as a part of that, but it can not be the sole title.

We're going to try this title for awhile and see how it works in relation to easier access from the web's search engines.  The name may be changed again at a future time, as this is still a story in progress.

[Repo Man]

A completely made-up name would be best imo.

[Mercury]

Sorry to fuck everything up, bro, but anyone could do a very quick summary of what happened since Debry couldn't find flowers at the Yum Yum Market ? I found out I couldn't read all of this. And I need to write.

[BloodChuckZ]

Whew...You should check in more often, my friend !

Hang on a bit....I'll check back and summerize.

[Repo Man]

Nick beat Russell!

[Mike_W]

Oh yeah, Chuck....I'll add my bit about the Prep/Greaser thing once you finish Tony's conversation with Karen. Its just that you left him at the end of the post asking Karen a question, so I didn't feel right about suddenly transporting him to the Auto Shop.

[BloodChuckZ]

No, that's Ok Mike....That's a 'Planned Fade Out'.....I will probably refer to Karen's discription in the past tense in Tony's future thoughts, so go ahead and put in your part.

Mercury, you have posted a couple of times since the start of Chapter 4....So, I’ll start there.

Tom & Troy rob ‘Rocket In My Pocket’ store and get away with it.
Rockers recover, Tony wakes up in clinic after falling off roof. Is in Clinic for 2 weeks.
Ray is seriously injured, will be in clinic until Chapter 5.
Melvin and Fatty talk about weapons. (Your Post).
Bullies hide newly aquirred weapons on path between Library and Harrington House.
Peanut wins a slingshot duel with Wade in the School Foyer.
Laurent & Constantinos take over Tony’s office until he returns.
Mandy and Ted get back together.
Zoe comes to Clinic, agrees to help Tony and Karen.
Vance went to live in a hidden cave on Pirate Island.
Bif starts wooing Christy. (Your Post).
Peanut fights with Davis and Tom, Norton gets knocked out by errant Spud.
Norton cons Damon into bringing Jocks to fight against Bullies without Ted’s knowedge.
Mr. Luntz returns from New York, the Mafia wars have begun.
Jake talks to Jerry and Duncan to set up meeting with the Townies.
Christie and Pinky start having weekly meetings at Shinjo’s.
Greasers / Jocks fight the Bullies in Parking Lot. Melody is hit in guts by errant Spud.
Nick leaps onto Russell, uses him as springboard to smash Norton to the ground.
Prefects break up fight, Norton challenges Nick to fight in the Hole.
Nick and Norton fight in the Hole, Nick wins.
Peanut takes back over the Greasers, demotes Norton.
Ted threatens Jocks with loss of scholarships because of the fight, demotes Damon.
Russell demands Trent be brought back into Clique.
Trent talks to Tony in Clinic, tell all he knows about Jake.
Derby finds out All flowers and candy stocks are gone, bought up by Tad’s faction.
Bif reveals his real plan for making Christy his Girlfriend.
Omar, leader of the Townies, agrees to meet with Jake aka Leo Cash.
Trent re-joins Bullies, they attack Nerds at Library.
Trent makes Bullies move hidden weapons to a spot behind Dorm where Jake once hid.
Nerds find book in Library authored by Edward the Prefect about weapons at Bullworth.
Picture in book shows defensive Shield, Nerds decide to steal it from Preps.
Bullies attack Corneluis, beat him and steal book.
Melvin, Fatty, and Cornelius enter Harrington House armed, Knock out Derby, steal shield.
Tony is released from Clinic wearing a sling because of healing injury where Jake shot him.
Tony gets Nick to challenge Russell to hole fight to stop the Bullies drug trade.
Nick and Russell fight in the Hole, Nick wins. Russell agrees to stop selling drugs on Campus.
Bullies attack Preps at Harrington House in sneak attack, steal second Shield.
Bullies stash second Shield under Dorm. Both Bullies and Nerds are unaware there are 2 Shields.
Perfects find out about missing Shields, search Dorm but can’t find them.
Benny fixes old wideband radio, finds he can pick up transmissions from Jake’s hidden Walkie Talkies.
Bullies sell drugs at In & Out Motel to Jimmy, without recognizing him.
Tony tries to play catch with Fatty with bad results.
Algie spots Jake (Ace Adams) off carnival grounds and follows him.
Jake has meeting with Omar & the Townies, they agree to help him attack Bullworth for $3 Grand.
Jake discovers Algie following him and knocks him off bike.
Algie pleads for weapons, Jake aka Leo Cash agrees to sell him some.
Derby seems to give in, convinces the Preps to re-unite.
Nick beats up Trent for bullying Pedro.
Christy had big date with Bif, at the end they have sex.
Lance Jackson, still recovering from injuries from getting beaten by the Punks, returns to Bullworth.
Pinky invites Christy to the Hattrick House, there she meets Winkie.
Nick begins training Pedro to defend himself at the Hobo Yard.
Jake sells weapons to Algie, recruits him to join attack on school with him & the Townies.
Zoe and Jimmy plot to break into Harrington House.
Karen helps Tony to make some important connections.
Jake gets the Townies trained to perpare for the attack.
Chad pretties up Lefty's Bike.
Nick beats up Ricky and makes him drink piss.
The Greasers hold a Pow-Wow.
Tony and Nick have a conservation.
Derby plans raid on Rockers.
The Prey becomes the Predator.
Zoe and Jimmy do a break-in.
The Preps are bushwacked, Kurt beats up Derby.
Zoe and Jimmy make a discovery.
The Preps are dumped on the lawn.

That’s it so far.....Kind of a summary of Chapter 4. Damn, that's a hell of a lot !

[Repo Man]

I was planning to have Nick beat up Ricky for pissing on Pedro's bed, but I don't know now. What do you think, should I write it or there's a problem?

[BloodChuckZ]

No problem there....Ricky needs his ass beat anyway.