NES Comments

[BloodChuckZ]

I know, I know.....That wasn't my doing.  He was introduced that way by another author back in Chapter 1 somewhere and it was just never corrected.  To fix it now, I'd have to go through and find everywhere he's mentioned and change the name.  I might do that if I get the time to wade through this again.  But for now, I've left it.  This is his last appearance in the story anyway.

[BloodChuckZ]

Trent will certainly alter the course of events on this day.

[BloodChuckZ]

An Update regarding some changes to the presentation to our story.....

Since 'Chapter 5' was topping 160,000 words, I have split it into 2 Chapters.  Chapter 5 now ends where Pete walks into the Justice Department Building in Washington DC.  The newly created Chapter 6 begins back at Bullworth, where Tony is suffering through Math Class.  Only one small establishing paragraph of text was added, the rest of the story is unaltered.

Since I will be sending these Chapters out as files, this will facilitate having a smaller file size for Chapter 5.  It still remains the longest Chapter, however, at 105,000 words.

[NaisBully]

I'm sorry but I have to say
1; Excited about Trent being a hero possibly maybe (or the bullies)
2; Loved the What'chu talkin' 'bout Lance? reference
I shall shush now

[BloodChuckZ]

Bullworth Town and the Vale Valley have been saved....But what of the School ?

Stand by for our exiting conclusion !!

[Red Blaster]

How many more posts until the story is finished?

[BloodChuckZ]

Four more, and then an Epilogue.

After that, will go on to the 'Never Ending Summer' part of the story.

[Evolution]

I'm interested to see what will happen in that.

[BloodChuckZ]

The Main Body of the story is completed.  After this, I will set up a few starter posts to set the direction, then open it up for anyone who wants to help continue the story.

Keep in mind to follow the already established storylines of each of the characters, and the overall storyline in general.  Those deviating from the established parameters of the story will have their posts edited or deleted.

[BloodChuckZ]

The Bullworth Never Ending Story, as of now, is a complete story on it's own.  I worked on this story for 2 & a half years, and posted over 80% of it's content.  I wish to thank those who read it, and the more than 22,000 hits it has gotten.  Writing something is never fun unless there are readers, and I am grateful to those who did.  I hope you enjoyed the story as much as I had in the writing of it.

For those who wish copies of the story via Email, contact me through PM and I will send you the edited text copies that have additional content.

[Chrissy]

All you had to do was make mention of it. It is your thread.

[BloodChuckZ]

Actually, the NES was Mercury's thread to start with.  But Thanks.

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

OK, so you run this little thing now Chuck, congratulations, and I'm in Chapter 2 right now, the story is interesting.
Edit: Hey, shouldn't you tell Mercury of this, so that he wouldn't get angry if he knew the moderatgion of this was taken from him?

[Chrissy]

You've put the most into it, so fair is fair.

[BloodChuckZ]

I'm going to be setting a few establishing character posts here over this month, bringing back a few characters and adding some new ones.  If any of you have any ideas on characters you would like to see, post them here.  I'm looking for mainly more girl characters than boys, to balance a little more the inequity of the male / female population.  No new boy Cliques, please, I just got rid of the Rockers, and am not looking to add any more of those Cliques.  But I will entertain some all-girl Cliques, as I feel strongly this is what has been missing here all along.