NES Comments

[BloodChuckZ]

Don't worry my man.....Plenty of other romantic hook-ups are in our future story.

Send Tony over to the Greasers like you planned...They just had to make a little detour first....

I'll write up the attack on the Nerds after that....

[BloodChuckZ]

Quick note....I put in a bunch, 5 new sections, so read page 19 as well as 20. (My last section started page 20 on my screen)......

[BloodChuckZ]

Just fixed a couple techincal glitches about the old shower house, now that I went back to the game and gave it a good look.

And, I have spots for both the Nerds and Greaser retribution attacks by Algie.....Just need to get Tony's parlay with the Greasers written by you, Mercury, to move the story along.

[Mercury]

what parlay with the Greasers ? I'm somewhat lost...

[BloodChuckZ]

You had Tony and Constantinos headed over to see the Greasers.....?

At the Autoshop.......?

[Repo Man]

...and they were stopped by Pete.

[BloodChuckZ]

.....And now they're done talking with Pete, and can continue on to the AutoShop.

[Repo Man]

Clears it up, Merc?

[BloodChuckZ]

Ahhh, that's alright....I'll go ahead and take them over there and get the talk started, Mercury can pick it up from there if he wants.

That way, I can move the next part ahead, while Tony & Constantinos are over at the Autoshop.

[Repo Man]

I just wanted to say something considering the newcomer, Nick's story. Although I wanted to make it parallel to Tony's, it's difficult because of different seasons. Instead, it's a completely new story, all cliques are (still) present, but Jimmy is expelled for painting another prank graffiti on Harrington House.

[BloodChuckZ]

That's OK, Repo.....I figured it was a seperate story to start with, although I may introduce some elements of it into the NES at a later date, at least parts of it that I author....Nick seems like an interesting character that could be used later in the big story as well.

The large NES story has over 104,000 words at this point, and we are just getting to the end of Chapter 2......

Mercury must be on vacation or something....I'll carry on till he gets back. Got a few suprises in store for our heros....

[Repo Man]

Thanks. You know I posted Nick's story just because it was difficult for me to reply to Tony's (when I came to Bully Board 16 pages were written) and I hope it will grow.

[BloodChuckZ]

We started with like 8 different authors on the big story, and it just sorta took off...I didn't come in until about page 4 (?), I think....But it really took off, with a lotta multiple plots, and we had to get it organized into something that had some continuity. A lot of our original authors are gone now, it's just mostly me & Mercury left to carry it on.  So, if you get time, read through the story, and contribute if you would like.  I thought the one you put in so far was just fine.

As for yours, I hope it can grow as well....We really just need some more authors to help move it along.  Quite possibly, since it's summer, people are off doing other things, and maybe it will pick up again once school starts in the fall.

[Mike_W]

Have no fear, Mike is here!  I decided to join in just now and I'll try to add some other stuff later.  Today's part of the story was partially inspired by events that happend while playing Bully today.

[BloodChuckZ]

Mike.....be sure to follow the storyline......Most all the clique members have still to be released from the clinics and Infirmaries because of the recent attacks....The school is almost a ghost town, with only the girls, non-cliques, and younger kids attending classes.