NES Comments

[Trent]

Hey guys, I have a new character for the story, his name is garland greene. Check the "create a new character" on the bully discussion for more info.

[BloodChuckZ]

That's great, Trent....Just ask you wait to introduce him after the holidays are over (after New Years), when school is back in session.  Won't be long...Keep checking back.

In fact, I also have a new character to bring in as well at that time, also.....

[BloodChuckZ]

OK, it's after New Year's, and all the cliques (except the Nerds) are weaponless....Back to some good old fighting moves until they manage to re-arm some how. 

Sneaking suspicion that some of the Nerds will want to take some revenge for past wrongs....Remember Algie is in the nut house now, and the Nerds consider him a traitor.

Any new characters should be introduced now....I've brought Nick into the story.

[Repo Man]

Nick Penty?

[BloodChuckZ]

Why Yes, Repo.....I think he is a cool character and should be included in the main story.  Also, he was the only character who had a side story and hadn't been in the main story. I think he can fit in, and maybe work with Tony (and Jimmy) eventually....We got enough 'Bad Kids', strikes me that Nick could be a great add to the forces of good at Bullworth NES.

[BloodChuckZ]

I changed the inital description of Nick to match yours, Repo, so there won't be any differences.  I had introduced him as too much of a badass, and that won't mesh right in the NES main story.  Your discription is better, so we'll go with that.

You can still write the mini-story about Nick and his adventures, seperate from the main story, as you have been.

[Repo Man]

I'd like to see Nick fight Damon...I've made Nick as a very skilled fighter (why the hell would I make a nerd if I can a fighter?) so I think he would last long against the gorilla man.

[BloodChuckZ]

That sounds like a neat idea !  We will have to set that up.  In fact, I think Nick will have to show off his Karate and Boxing skills quite soon and quite often.

[Repo Man]

Since Nick is the new kid, he has no friends in Bullworth, so how about something that would earn him respect? Like a fighting tournament in The Hole, in which Nick meets Jimmy in the final and defeats him.

[Mike_W]

 I don't know if he should fight Jimmy, afterall, Jimmy is on the good side and Nick will be too eventually.  I like the Damon idea though.  I was planning on Damon to come back from a date after curfew and fight a prefect, maybe I could fit Nick in there somewhere to to fight Damon.

[Repo Man]

But...will Nick kick the fuck out of his ass, or get beaten up a bit himself?

[BloodChuckZ]

Nick should perhaps fight the toughest one in each of the cliques (Nerds excluded...they have no tough membes)....Damon, Derby, and whoever is left toughest in the Greasers....He has already had a go-around with Trent, and possibly have a go-around with Wade and Davis, since they're too stupid to leave him alone.

Jimmy is to be a shadow, only coming out in the open at night.  Only Tony & Constantinos even knows he has escaped (besides the Cops and the Haringtons), and it should stay that way.

Envision Nick as an enforcer for Tony (not that he couldn't take care of himself), as a force for reluctant good against the forces of evil at Bullworth.  And as to a friend, Nick already has his first friend....Tony.

[Mercury]

I love the way the stories areimplicated into each other ! I'll continue writing soon !

[BloodChuckZ]

Thinking about Sheldon (from another thread).....He is older now, maybe we could use him in the story somewhere....?

In fact, there is a whole untapped potential of non-clique students....I have a hair of an idea that we could unite the non-cliques INTO a clique, with Tony as the leader....

[Repo Man]

That would be a pretty weak clique. Sure Nick can kick some asses here and there, but all non-clique students are as weak as a potato.