SOB Discussion & Comments

[Le Ghost]

This reads well so far, just wish there was more soon.

[c00ld0c26]

There is more soon, I think we worked a bit faster then usuall lately, its just a matter of Alex finishing it.

[Evolution]

Glad to hear that, Le Ghost. There will be more coming soon.

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

There's a post coming soon. Alex made it, but he's just waiting for me to edit some things in it, but don't expect that to happen fast as I've got other things to do other than editing posts.

[c00ld0c26]

Then I will kill you

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

Just made a small but important modification for the last post in the story. I added that Damon became the Jocks' leader after Ted's departure.

Also, I edited Alex's post, and sent it back to Alex. Alex is just doing some minor modifications in it, and then he'll post it.

[BloodChuckZ]

Nice post about Derek, the new character. I edited the last part about the Prep because the text kept flipping back and forth between 'Relating Events' and 'Present Tense', which becomes confusing to the reader, and I added just a wee bit more definition to the scene overall.

[c00ld0c26]

Hehe, Derek is pretty much of a main/side character who will give insight onto a certain clique in the school.
But what I am really waiting for is when I finish my John post (my character) and finally Alex or Mo will edit it and then I'll post, I wanna do this a bit quicker then we usually post the others because I dont like the fact that there is like a new post every 2 weeks hehe.

[BloodChuckZ]

Actually, probably need to step it up just a bit.  I'd suggest maybe shorter posts.  That way there wouldn't be as much material to write and check over.  (I can get away with longer ones cuz I'm good, and it don't take me 2 weeks till the next one....But then, I'm actually trying to finish the story, finally)......Maybe one scene per post, that's what I shoot for, anyway.

[c00ld0c26]

Well, due for a slight change in the timeline, my post will propebly will be after 2 more posts which we haven't even start writing.
While my post is nearly half done, so its gonna take a bit more time.

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

Another post posted, I did it with a lot of edits from Alex. Next post is Alex's, which he's starting to do already.

[Evolution]

^ Which I've already *done.

Now it's just a matter of getting to use my own PC, which I don't think I'll be able to due to the fact that I haven't gotten a Universal Plug Charger to use in England, and I most likely won't for the next three weeks... Which is when I go back to Australia.

[Evolution]

Other than that, Chuck is a totally RAD dude to be editing our posts... Hell, I just reread that post and it was a MILLION times better! Whether or not we notice it, these little edits GREATLY improve the quality of the story.

[c00ld0c26]

Awww man, Alex why cant u post it from your laptop or smth?!

[BloodChuckZ]

I would guess that the story is in a file in his own PC, and he lacks a Universal Plug Charger to power it.

http://www.kensington.com/kensington/us/us/p/1416/K33346US-CL/international-travel-plug-adapter-with-usb-charger.aspx

So I would also guess he is using an on-site computer (That is not his PC) in the country he is in presently (England), and is unable to access the file to copy & paste to BB at present.