Adventures of the Skaters-Episode 1: Humble Beginnings

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OK i finished the first episode of the video series on the clique i made: the skaters. for more info on the skaters you can see my topic on them in the bully modding section. This was my first attempt at anything like this, and any feedback will be very helpful. this one was pretty short, but the rest of the episodes will be longer. Anyways, here it is.
Adventures of the Skaters- Episode 1: Humble Beginnings

[Red Blaster]

You should add more variety in the music, ones that fit the situation.

Also, if possible try getting two NPC's to fight instead of you doing the fighting yourself.

[-мα∂нαттяι¢к-]

Thanks, I'll try to do that in the next video. Overall did u like it?

[Red Blaster]

Better than what most other users did, which says something.

[Evolution]

I think Red nailed it.

Maybe lure the other "Skater" members to the person you plan to fight and provoke the fight, for example attack the person you want to fight and let the gang member back you up and start recording then. (Make sure the Skater is close by to you though, like keep greeting them so they follow you then attack the person)

Also,  the Quality is not "Great" but it is quite good either way.

And the music kept replaying over the whole period of the video, which got a little bit irritating, maybe try to change the songs more often, and maybe play something more "Soft" but not to "Wimpy" or "boring." (like Red said, make the music fit the situation.)

If you get really serious with the series, maybe if you can, get a professional video editing software.

Overall I think it was quite good.

And I look forward to the future episodes.

[-мα∂нαттяι¢к-]

Thanks for the feedback! And i agree with everything u said, and will look to improve thos e problems in the later episodes.

[Al Arlington]

I seriously don't get why Governmentman123 is saying this is a rip-off.
If he inspired you then that's a good thing isn't it?
I'm confused, but either way your video is good and since I found out you have a YouTube account, guess who earned a sub?