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« Reply #75 on: January 11, 2010, 01:06:03 PM »
Yeah, haha ! I think this war between Pinky and Karen will be interesting, and will give me much to write... ;)

What has Tony to do next ? No other deals for now, it would be too soon.
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« Reply #76 on: January 11, 2010, 01:12:01 PM »
BTW, I really begin to find all this story writing sooo cool ! As I wrote the deal with the preppies, talking about the skirt delivery, I would never have thought that I would lead to a girls war... All comes with an impressive fluidity ! So... Human.
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« Reply #77 on: January 11, 2010, 01:36:18 PM »
Exactly....Each story element is a set-up for what is to come....This is why I like writing stories....When the Ideas flow and you add new elements, it opens up infinite possibilites where the story can lead....

I have to go back and check often, so I don't overlook missed stuff....Like Pinky's skirt...I saw your post here right after I put in the part about Tony moving the stash, and saw your Pinky part, thought...Oh, Shit, yeah...Went back and checked, then made some changes to mine to set up that part of Tony taking her the skirt for you...

Then, you threw in a few surprises there, and it had me going...Whoaaaa...Far Out !!!
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« Reply #78 on: January 11, 2010, 04:22:40 PM »
when the story was first starting I wrote large part of it but...I forgot the to refresh the page and it turns out that the part I wrote was already written...
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« Reply #79 on: January 11, 2010, 04:27:27 PM »
Any detail is important, because each one can lead to another direction... I just love it ! This story is just... Never gonna end ! ;)
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« Reply #80 on: January 11, 2010, 05:51:08 PM »
To Dudemann5798 :

Be careful to read previous posts so that it sticks with the story. We had written that students could only go in town 2 hours per day - it's impossible for the Rockers to hang out there, sorry for you.
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« Reply #81 on: January 11, 2010, 06:37:22 PM »
Well, I fixed that, Mercury.....I just had them expelled.
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« Reply #82 on: January 11, 2010, 07:13:27 PM »
I like how this story is turning out.  Too bad Jimmy couldn't get into the Nerd's hide-out in the real game.  Then he could commit map abuse!
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« Reply #83 on: January 11, 2010, 08:50:16 PM »
Hey Mike, are you gonna post to the story? We could use a little help.
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« Reply #84 on: January 11, 2010, 10:46:38 PM »
Dude, if I tried to add to the story I would undoubtedly fuck it up.  I'm really not that great at story telling.
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« Reply #85 on: January 12, 2010, 11:54:43 AM »
I'll transfer Hopkins to a local prison ; too much advices would be too easy.
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« Reply #86 on: January 12, 2010, 12:03:14 PM »
Jimmy should make an appearance later in the story at the school or something.
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« Reply #87 on: January 12, 2010, 01:07:24 PM »
I think Mercury is on the right track...Jimmy should already be at the Prison...Maybe just in Bullworth Town for a court hearing or something, and has to be returned.....

Johnny Vincent is in Prison, too...Haven't found out why yet.....

Maybe way later in the story, they could be released on Parole....I would think towards the end of the school year, perhaps....Long ways off, we're not even to Halloween yet.
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« Reply #88 on: January 12, 2010, 01:10:30 PM »
Jimmy seems like the type that would try to break out though....;)
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« Reply #89 on: January 12, 2010, 01:28:23 PM »
Yeah.....That's an idea....He already broke out Johnny once....

Mayby they could break out together, and be on the lam....

Don't know why they would choose to hang around Bullworth world though...
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