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« Reply #225 on: January 26, 2010, 08:39:56 PM »
On my WORD doucument I'm showing 145 pages.....

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« Reply #226 on: January 26, 2010, 10:50:03 PM »
Damn! It's gonna be a novel.

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« Reply #227 on: January 27, 2010, 07:02:16 AM »
thank you mercury, for starting one of the best topics on bullyboard!

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« Reply #228 on: January 27, 2010, 08:09:50 AM »
Yes, thank you.

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« Reply #229 on: January 27, 2010, 11:42:36 AM »
Oh, thanks to you boys too, for joining me in this story !

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« Reply #230 on: January 27, 2010, 09:01:02 PM »
So do you think this story will have an ending? Or will it keep going until we die.

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« Reply #231 on: January 27, 2010, 10:00:21 PM »
I highly doubt we'll be writing about Tony when we're in our 80s...

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« Reply #232 on: January 28, 2010, 05:04:12 AM »
Well...Figgure this....Six chapters at 50,000 words a chapter.....

That works out to Novel lengh at 300,000 words.

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« Reply #233 on: January 28, 2010, 11:45:06 AM »
They'll be much more... Jimmy had to smash each clique under submission, what means five chapters, it's another schema in our NES.

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« Reply #234 on: January 28, 2010, 01:59:53 PM »
But we’re not running a carbon-copy of Jimmy’s Bullworth story….Tony isn’t here to smash the cliques into submission, but to eventually control them and gain power over them by controlling them through commerce with goods and services.  Let’s all face it, Jimmy was a not-too-bright troublemaker who was too stupid to get anything done that involved brainpower, and let others use and control him.  Tony, however, is a smart kid who can see opportunities when they present themselves.  Tony can make plans and carry them out. Tony’s main strengths lays in his power to negotiate, where Jimmy’s only power was brute force.

Tony’s character, and the characters of many of the others have been developed far beyond what they were in the original story. The story paths that have been taken in chapter one alone gives more insight into the various recurring characters than we ever knew in the past. We have here the means to delve into each character’s personalities in a way that the original game could not. Both old and new, we can now see the motivation of each character and clique, find out their story and what it means to live the Bullworth life.

With each author introducing new elements into the story, it becomes a real challenge to keep up with the changes. But this is what makes it fun, to adapt to the changing story elements. One thing we should all agree on is to keep moving the timeline forward in a realistic manner, just like in real life. Right now, we are between Halloween and Thanksgiving. By Christmas time, another 40,000 words away, we could start chapter three.  In this way, we could have, by the story’s summertime, a full novel that could stand on it’s own.

Even the “Never Ending Story” movie had an ending….BUT, it had sequels, that carried on the story. Same thing could be done here, if there are any left to carry it on when we are gone.  I think, it will take 6 months to a year to reach our own ‘Endless Summer”…..If we can stick with it that long, that is.

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« Reply #235 on: January 28, 2010, 11:02:55 PM »
We should make sequals to the story.

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« Reply #236 on: January 28, 2010, 11:28:55 PM »
That's what I'm saying.....This is a massive undertaking, really....When I first checked the word count, and saw that it was at 50,000, I went, WHOA...So, I put in my next post to make that the end of Chapter 1....Because, this is no short story anymore....This has become something bigger....So, we should treat it as such...Give the story some structure, and make a reasonable plan for it....

Reason I checked the word count was, I had like 107 pages saved over to word, and I was getting tired of scrolling down to add the next segment.  Now, I have Chapter 1 on that saved file, and Chapter 2 on the next saved file....

Don't know if we can ever do anything with this, but who knows ? I know there has to be others besides us reading it, and we are the Authors, so we should have some rights...Just in case if there is anything we could make out of it....

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« Reply #237 on: January 30, 2010, 08:06:34 PM »
Damn there's been almost 2000 views and I know that wasn't all us. Do you think we need some more help?

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« Reply #238 on: January 30, 2010, 08:19:33 PM »
I may sound egoistic, but... I think we're good like that. I've seen new members though, like JocksKnockOutNerds and I_bully_the_Bullies.

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« Reply #239 on: January 30, 2010, 09:49:56 PM »
If those of us who have written so far, if we all contribute, then we should do OK....

The story has gotten complex, and any newbies would have to read the entire thing, which they won't do, to be able to join the story....

As long as we who know the characters just keep at it, and follow the flow, we should do alright....