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UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« on: January 31, 2015, 09:18:06 PM »
BULLY SE : Undead (EPISODE 1)

Let me know what you think.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2015, 12:42:46 AM »
Pretty off looks great
But after minute 10:00, when the night comes,
it gets pretty dark and I can't see a thing, I mean their face & It is hard to tell who speak to who
I know it is night, but still....
« Last Edit: February 01, 2015, 12:53:44 AM by Davidlam »
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2015, 02:55:18 AM »
WOW.....my brain is bleeding from ecstasy....WOW.


Real nice intro scenes.
Background Music...Spot on.
Plot opening....Excellent.
Name of Wife (Danielle ...?), couldn't quite catch.
Why is Tim headed to the Academy ?
Nice buildup and groundwork for first episode.
New characters at the end a draw to watch Episode 2.
Great camera angles.
Sets mood.

CHARACTERS SO FAR....
Carl
Carl's wife (Danielle...?)
Ed (her father, unseen ?)
Tim
Ben
Sondra
Elliott

Rating : 9.97
Another Walkers++ in the making.

"A must see for all Bullworth Zombie fans !!" -- BloodChuckZ Times & Review.






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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2015, 04:11:33 AM »
Great intro, only 2 complaints...

1) Sometimes it feels like the audio isn't balanced. Like one character will be really loud, when the other is quiet, and I have to keep adjusting my volume. It'd make sense if one was screaming and one was whispering, but even at the same tone.

2) The car windows changes colors between scenes... (Try VehicleSetColor(Car,1) or VehicleSetColor(Car,54))
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2015, 05:33:17 AM »
Thanks for the feedback, guys.
I'll make sure to note this down for episode 2 when I start rolling with it.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2015, 08:22:14 AM »
Anyway, looking forward to another great series.  ;D

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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2015, 08:40:58 AM »
Nice. Thanks for making me main char btw bro.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #7 on: February 01, 2015, 10:23:14 AM »
Quote from: alontzedaka on February 01, 2015, 08:40:58 AM
Nice. Thanks for making me main char btw bro.
I think, it is more like, thanks for making me to fill the voice of the main char
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #8 on: February 01, 2015, 07:36:34 PM »
Eh, same difference, really.
Was that Chrissy as Carl's wife, or Sondra ?
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2015, 10:53:04 PM »
^ Neither. It was just a random person from youtube.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #10 on: February 02, 2015, 12:19:51 AM »
"Random person" K.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2015, 02:49:23 AM »
I don't really know her name. =P Swegta didn't mention who it was. Just some person who volunteered.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #12 on: February 02, 2015, 04:14:12 AM »
I think it's weird that the main character didn't gave a fuck about his girlfriend.  He hasn't talked about her girlfriend like if she's okay or anything.

And the voices is high and sometimes low, which is very annoying.  But apart from that, it was pretty fucking amazing.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #13 on: February 02, 2015, 04:22:10 AM »
Well, he did go back looking for her, but she wasn't there. And, she was a wife, not a GF.
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Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
« Reply #14 on: February 02, 2015, 04:23:43 AM »
Well...  I might missed that, i watched this when i was going to sleep. Might have been slept that part, lol. 
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