SOB Discussion & Comments

[BloodChuckZ]

^ Yeah, hell I missed that.  Just added a few tiny things myself. 

Now, is John and Phillip going to be rooming together ?  That would make sense, as Dorm space is limited.  They could even become friends, of a sort, help each other out ?  Just a thought.

If you are planning a direction for upcoming events and are doing so by PM, let me know.  I might even like to contribute a story post here and there.

[Evolution]

Now, is John and Phillip going to be rooming together ?  That would make sense, as Dorm space is limited.  They could even become friends, of a sort, help each other out ?  Just a thought.

Heh, you read part of our plot plans for chapter 1 right there there. Yes, John and Phillip will be having major interactions with each other, especially in Chapter 1, they won't become 'friends'.... at first. (No, they won't be roomed together, but like I said, they will come across each others paths, directly and indirectly all throughout Chapter 1.) But I won't reveal anymore than that in this thread as I don't want to spoil the plot, so I'll send you a PM about the whole 'Chapter 1' plot if you wish, Phillip and John being main players in the first chapter.

If you are planning a direction for upcoming events and are doing so by PM, let me know.  I might even like to contribute a story post here and there.

We've planned EVERYTHING, storyline wise, from beginning to end. Major events, although not as present in chapter 1, will be very present throughout the other chapters. And yes, we're organizing this largely through PM's on BB and chats on Xfire, (c00ld0c and I especially.) If you wish to know the plot details, I'll send you a PM, I suppose? And heh, that'd be awesome to have you make an occasional post here and there!

[BloodChuckZ]

I would be glad to contribute to the story with any of my specialties....I've found I have a bit of talent with 'Love Scenes' and such, Heh. 

Since your main plot is already set, you won't need me for that, but for smaller undefined-as-yet side plots I could weigh in on.

My main focus is to finish the NES, and I'm still heavily involved in other things, but an occasional post would be cool.  Just let me know !

[Evolution]

Yes, we do have a set out plot, but, the thing is, the plot will change very often and we could always use your opinions on such plots ideas, as we'd love your opinions. I'll be working more on the story and I'll give you some plot information soon.

And yeah, side-plots we haven't really gotten figured out. But I do have such ideas, especially after the 'end,' of the story, similar to what you've done with the NES. But yeah, I'll give you a shout out.

[c00ld0c26]

This is amazing.
Im glad that Chuck is helping us out, this will now turn a lot better.

[BloodChuckZ]

Yes....But I want this to be YOUR Guys story.  I don't want to interfere.  It would be great to see another long FanFic here, and to keep the readers coming back. 

There is like, 32,000+ hits on the NES so far (and mostly from outside viewers), but that will probably drop off after the story is done.  Having another continuing story here will keep interest alive.

[Red Blaster]

I am rewriting the main story of my fanfic which is based on Bully once I finish the short side-story. Hopefully it can keep interest fresh in this section.

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

The communiity stories is heading to a great path.

[c00ld0c26]

A great path which awaits for 3 noobly Heros to rise to the top.

[Evolution]

Due to the fact that vacation is over and I'm back at school, I'm being loaded with homework and school work, and I'm going to be taken up by studying and all that bullshit. Because of this, the 'SOB' story will be worked on slower. When I DO get free-time, most likely on the weekend, I'll work on it.

Made a very minor update to the most recent post in the topic, just fixed an error, the 'he boy' bit into 'the boy.'

[Evolution]

This story is still being worked on. Just slowed down on the posts recently due to 'real life' factors. Also, writing meetings with Crabblesnitch is necessary if the student has a past 'record', which is kind of getting tiring. But, oh well, won't be another for awhile after I introduce another character that's coming up in the next post.

[c00ld0c26]

Good thing.
I wanna start posting already

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

After a long time, a new post. This time, I'm the writer of this post, with some edits from Evolution (Alex). This is the biggest thing I've ever participated in.

Also, you should know that there won't be any more posts for a week or so, because Alex has homework and will fail classes if he dedicates all his time for the SOB.

Hi, Alex

[c00ld0c26]

I wanna start writing my posts already, damn you ALEX!
LOL.
Btw great post, loved it!

[BloodChuckZ]

Impressive.  Some-ones are getting better at this.

A lot fewer syntax errors this time.  I would suggest a couple of fixes...

{He bloomed sarcastically, “We’re the most humiliated clique in this school.}

         ^^ You probably meant 'boomed' here.


This part as is is....

{Although he’s  kind at heart, Cory is an amazing football player, which made him respected by the entire Jock clique and gave him a type of ‘reputation’, one which he’d have to uphold no matter what.}

As it should be.....

{Although he was kind at heart, Cory was an amazing football player, which made him respected by the entire Jock clique and gave him a type of ‘reputation’, one which he’d have to uphold no matter what.}
 
See the difference ?