Damn, both of these were actually pretty good. I gotta say, a broken mission, in the basement, involving the janitor, with mismatching cutscene and audio, low detail models, all of those ideas are great, and more than amazing when used all together.
The only thing that I didn't quite like was, in Nathan's one, the fact that he could untie Pete and the girl, go to the principal's office, call the police and get the psycho arrested. It feels like that's too much detail for a broken mission, and sort of killed the scary mood.