FanFic Questions And Comments

[BloodChuckZ]

Comments on the latest TLODIL story......
Your style continues to improve, keep it up.
The "Ground" is anything outside, the "Floor" is inside.
It's Ok to have sex when a girl/woman is preggers, that doesn't hurt anything.
Taking bets on if it's a girl or boy.  If a boy, Tony's name is Antonino Calderone, Jr.

[Sphinx]

I have a plan for the child, a great plan, and a plan for the way ahead future.

[BloodChuckZ]

I assume this is far ahead, since it takes 9 months to gestate a baby.
You haven't put in any time parameters, so I'll let you in on the progression.

September 2007 - Tony comes to Bullworth.
June 2010 - Tony graduates Bullworth.
June 2011 - Karen graduates Bullworth.
2010 to 2014 - Tony in College.
2011 to 2015 - Karen in College.
May 2014 - Tony graduates College.
June 2014 - Tony and Karen marry.
May 2015 - Karen graduates College.
Summer 2015 - Tony joins Liberty City PD.
Summer 2016 - Tony promoted to Detective.
Fall 2017 - Start of "To Live Or Die In Liberty"
Spring 2018 - Birth of 'Baby Calderone'.

The Bullworth NES covers only 1 year, from 2007-2008. 
Tony, Nick, Laurent, Constantinos, will all graduate the same year.
The others will graduate (some won't) at various years TBD.
The only ones I have for sure right now is Ted & Mandy graduate in Winter 2008-09, Mid-Year.

[BloodChuckZ]

Good start to 510's story, "The Post-Jimmy Hopkins era".....The idea of English twins is Super !!

[The 510 Series]

Thanks, Chuck, I'm literally about to start another update. Also, Bertie and Leah are actually real people - they go to my university!

[BloodChuckZ]

Take your time.  Good writing is an art to be crafted slow and steady.

[c00ld0c26]

Take your time.  Good writing is an art to be crafted slow and steady.

As the biology teacher says : Slow and Steady wins the race.

[BloodChuckZ]

I thought that was what the Tortoise said when he was racing the Rabbit ?

[BloodChuckZ]

What about Chad ?   Wasn't he also banned by the Preps, thereby being an ally of Parker ?

[The 510 Series]

I'll get to Chad later on. Some relatively interesting stuff will happen involving him.

[The 510 Series]

I'd just like to thank whoever removed that story.

[BloodChuckZ]

Well 510....Latest (Leaving Bullworth Behind) is a good read so far.....Hope you leave it up !

[The 510 Series]

Thanks! I'll be sure to keep it this time!

[BloodChuckZ]

Well....What can I say ?  The start of a new story, by a new member, is what.

The beginnings of a rather interesting concept.....The 3rd year of Bullworth, when Jimmy would be 17 and presumably a Senior, being started by MareeCena.
Hopefully, this story will go forward.  I would suggest making the title something like "Bullworth Year 3" or something like that.

[BloodChuckZ]

A new Story start, Bully : College Edition. is up....I want to see this story continued.  Post comments here.