FanFic Questions And Comments

[Sphinx]

Oh yes he will, I just need to think of how I can do this, but it's gonna involve teeth getting kicked in and nuts getting stomped on.

[BloodChuckZ]

I must comment, it is getting better as it goes along.
The readability is far better also.  Keep it going.

[Sphinx]

I'll do another post for it today, I need to think of how Troy's gonna get back at Ivan. AND I FUCKING FORGOT TO PUT GURNEY IN GOD DAMNIT AKLFJADLFJSDFJASDJSKLGJSFJGKSF FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

[Sphinx]

I got an idea for a long story after I'm done with the Great Bullworth Story. I'll combine all of my whacky experiences I can recall from Bully, make it acceptable for a story, and I shall create

THE BIBLE OF JIMMY HOPKINS

[BloodChuckZ]

That sounds real Interesting.  Good catchy title.

(And, you can always edit Gurney in, that's the Author's privilege).

[Sphinx]

I know, but I got an idea for him, and Trent who I also forgot

[Sphinx]

I need to think how I'm gonna play Sid out considering all we know is that he's a midget. hmm...

[BloodChuckZ]

Midgets can be very powerful, especially if they are real smart.

[Sphinx]

I know that, but I like to put myself in the characters point of view, but I can't exactly do that with Sid. Too bad you didn't keep Sid as a midget in the NES.

[BloodChuckZ]

Sid was a deleted Punk character, never a midget to my knowledge.

Are you constructing a Mystery here ?   That's what I like to read.

[Sphinx]

The only thing that exists of Sid really is the beta model on Tylers Art. He's a midget with a flathawk and suspenders. I'm trying to think of how I'm gonna go with this. It's gonna be a mystery with the Crabblesnitch family and how Gurney and Trent tie into this.

[Sphinx]

Forgot to mention, but I'm making at least one new character for each clique. Wayne was my character I was using for my first story which I never posted and never will. I'll still use that scrapped story in my current story later on. It'll play out well.

[BloodChuckZ]

I've found it's difficult to focus on too many characters, their feelings, their activities, their interactions, etc....Aside from maybe 5 main characters, I think about 20 secondary characters should be about the upper limit to closely follow, the rest could be mentioned and just lightly interacted with.

[Sphinx]

Yeah, I started this because I was bored and Ivan is one of my new favorite characters, but now I'm focusing on all the other cliques and finding ways for Ivan to tie into them. I have a real good idea of how this storyline is gonna go now. That's where Wayne comes in. Jimmy and Zoe have no involvement in this, but I'll put them in later.

[Sphinx]

I really lost a lot of inspiration for continuing my current story. So it's time to start my new idea

THE BIBLE OF JIMMY HOPKINS