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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #885 on: January 09, 2014, 10:50:26 AM »
Constantinos' issues will be addressed, and they will be highly dependent on the outcome of Tiffany.   He is one of many 'loose ends' whose fates are to be decided by the summer's end.

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« Reply #886 on: January 12, 2014, 06:00:19 PM »
I love how Bryce split from the group and joined another branch of the same faction..... A possible civil war uprising?

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« Reply #887 on: January 12, 2014, 06:45:41 PM »
This ain't the first time the Preps have split....Earlier in the story there was a "Derby Faction" and a "Tad Faction", if you remember that part. 

This was mostly over Pinky going to Bryce to ask for help for Tony....(part of her Redemption for using Tony as she has).  Turns out Bryce was the only Prep she felt she could trust to help.  Bryce went to the Preps to propose joining in with the other Cliques and taking the Shields along.  Pinky wouldn't go to the Preps herself, since she broke up with Tad over Vanessa.  Tad, Bif and Chad refused to go along on the mission, but Tad didn't stop the others from going or them taking the Shields. 

So, all this is sort of murky, since Tad has turned into kinda a prick since taking over power..  Justin and Parker, who were allied with Tad in the previous split, are now turning against him.  Chad, who was firmly allied with Derby before, is in Tad's corner now, as is Bif, who used to be Derby's bitch but is now Tad's bitch.

All this I plan to explore later in greater depth, particularly Tad's moving from a 'Good Prep' to a 'Bad Prep' and his inner motivations and conflicts, as since finally taking over the Clique after Derby's erratic leadership he has become just a clone of Derby.

Anyway, Bryce has another secret motivation for doing what he did, one he has nursed for a long time.  I'll get to that sooner than later. 


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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #888 on: January 12, 2014, 07:08:19 PM »


This is bound to be quite interesting.

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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #889 on: January 16, 2014, 09:14:39 PM »
Ok, it looks like Tiffany will live....(or will she ?).  Meanwhile, Constantinos has been sent packing for awhile.
Where ?  I don't know right now.  I'll have to set some 'Story Hound Dogs' after him to find out.  Or, I could just wait until he comes back, that's the only thing I know for sure at this point. 

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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #890 on: April 05, 2014, 12:08:29 AM »
Sounds like Beatrice needs to be ganged up on after word of this gets out. Maybe have Mandy beat her up good.

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« Reply #891 on: April 05, 2014, 11:15:18 AM »
But will the word get out ?  At present, only Nick, Melody and Beatrice know....Tony and Mandy do too, secondhand.  None of them will want to be broadcasting this about school.

But, I don't think this is over, oh no.  Entirely possible that Melody may seek out Mandy in private, once she learns the whole story about Beatrice's deception.   
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« Reply #892 on: April 08, 2014, 10:13:45 AM »
Pinky and Lola can't keep quiet about Tony forever, can they? It would really suck for Tony if Lola let it slip and Johnny goes apeshit, sending every greaser after Tony while Nick is still in the clinic, or Pinky trying to seduce Tony one last time and gets caught red handed and later on they bushwack Tony.

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« Reply #893 on: April 08, 2014, 01:23:29 PM »
Yes, that would suck for him, alright.....But I don't yet know how that is going to play out, if at all.  I wasn't really planing for Nick's encounter with Beatrice to come out, it just sorta happened. 

As I recall, Tony had two encounters with Lola....Once before Christmas, right before Lola left to go Join Johnny in Detroit, and once during the Kidnapping, when she 'traded' sex for information.  Johnny was out of the story for the first 6 chapters, and Lola was out from chapters 3 to 6.  They only returned at the start of the summer, and neither has been a student since the start of the story. 

At this point, neither Tony or Lola has any desire to reveal their encounters.  This may change, but not anytime soon, most likely if it ever does, it will be post-story, in which case I will include that in the epilogue, as this is the final chapter in the story.

Of any others who know about Lola, Nick knows, but will not say anything,  Jimmy Hopkins also knows, but he and Zoe have been written out of the story and will not return.

As for Pinky, she has had multiple encounters with Tony, going back to the late Fall.  Right after the first one, she broke up with Derby for good, wound up being Kidnapped herself by Kurt and the Rocker Clique and held captive for 6 days.  Pinky fell for Kurt and eventually moved in with him and her former captors. (Kurt and the Rockers were written out of the story by the end of chapter 6).  Pinky was with Tad for awhile, and has just hooked up with Bryce, who has led yet another split in the Prep ranks.  Derby had eventually found out about Tony having sex with Pinky and fought with Tony, after breaking Pinky's jaw, but it was on the day of the bombings in chapter 6, and Derby and his mother was sent off to England by Mr. Harrington shortly before his arrest not long after.

Karen has always been suspicious of Pinky and her designs on Tony, but has never learned of Tony's cheating.  For his part, Tony has been guilt-ridden about his encounters with Pinky (and Lola also), but has been unable to control his urges around Pinky when alone with her, to his shame.  Advised by Jimmy never to tell, Tony has done just that and kept his mouth shut, but always fearful that Karen might learn the truth. 

Of the two, there seems to be more danger that Tony's encounters with Pinky will be eventually revealed.  However, Pinky is afraid of Karen, who has really grown up because of her association with the Jock Clique and has already beat Pinky's ass twice in the story.  For the present, Pinky is entering a new relationship, and is not about to reveal anything.  Like with Lola, this might come out post-story, if it does, I will include it in the epilogue.   

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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #894 on: April 08, 2014, 01:41:58 PM »
Knowing this Pinky, I doubt she'll stay loyal to Bryce for very long. Lola will probably let it slip out somehow. Sucks Jimmy and Zoe are gone for good, I was hoping to see them in the end. Oh well, I'd like to see what's gonna happen with Thad when he finally walks around in public.

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Re: NES Comments
« Reply #895 on: April 08, 2014, 02:02:43 PM »
I know it's a long read, but how much of the NES have you read so far ?

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« Reply #896 on: April 08, 2014, 08:05:21 PM »
I'm up to your most recent post. I laughed like a retard a lot reading it.

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« Reply #897 on: April 08, 2014, 11:58:07 PM »
Maybe you have been one of our 'secret readers' all this time ?  The NES was begun 4 & 1/2 years ago.  The first Chapter was pretty sloppy, as was parts of Chapter, 2, but I have done re-edits (which haven't been posted yet) and also added 9,000 words to those chapters, also not posted yet....I figure when I get done, I'll have time to post them then. 

In the Epilogue, I want to try to touch on the major characters and their futures, both in and after Bullworth, so undoubtedly I will have an Update for Jimmy & Zoe along with that. 

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« Reply #898 on: April 09, 2014, 10:01:28 AM »
I got bored and wanted to find out more about Bully Beta, so I looked around and found this site, I read around and found the NES. It was interesting at the start but got kinda boring with the whole clothes stealing part with that fat shit Algie, but I kept reading and it got better and better. If I could cum from my eyes, I would have had enough to impregnate the world 100 times over.

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« Reply #899 on: April 09, 2014, 01:54:55 PM »
Well, it was begun by others, and kind of wandered around for awhile with no real direction.  I came in on page 3, and eventually just took over the whole thing.  I just planned 5 chapters to start with, and when I finished them, I was gonna be done.  But then I hadda go add an 'Endless Summer' to it, and then the girls got kidnapped, and it became another long haul.  But I figure another 30,000 words and I can finally finish it.