NES Comments

[BloodChuckZ]

About What ?

[Repo Man]

I dunno.

[BloodChuckZ]

I'm working on setting up a Hole Fight with Russell for Nick.  When Nick wins, the result will be that the Bullies will have to give up something.

[Repo Man]

Cool. But I'm not going to write it.

[BloodChuckZ]

No ?  Why not, you are good at it.

[Repo Man]

I will try to think of something good for that. PM me your reason for setting up the fight if you thought of it.

[BloodChuckZ]

OK.  It will be awhile for me to set it up though.

[BloodChuckZ]

OK, Repo....It's all set.  Up to you now.

[Repo Man]

*Heart beating* Ooookay...

[Repo Man]

Finally, the fight is done! Some parts of Nick's life are discovered here, too. Enjoy and say whatever's bad.

[BloodChuckZ]

So Nick's life is a lie ?  So he doesn't have his 4th degree Black Belt ? 

Born in Jersey, moved to Los Angles ?  A gangster Father, Mother escapes the mob to the west coast.......Or is that all a dream ?

Liked the fight....Good twists and turns, but Nick came through as we knew he would. 

Good Job, Repo !

[Mike_W]

That was really good, I like it. The only thing is, the rest of the Bullies are not as loyal as Russell is. To keep their end of the deal they are going to keep the drugs off campus, but still offer them in the alleys in town. They have a business alliance with the Townies for the drugs and they don't want to give up the business completely.

[Repo Man]

So Nick's life is a lie ?  So he doesn't have his 4th degree Black Belt ? 

Born in Jersey, moved to Los Angles ?  A gangster Father, Mother escapes the mob to the west coast.......Or is that all a dream ?

Liked the fight....Good twists and turns, but Nick came through as we knew he would. 

Good Job, Repo !

I can edit it if you don't like it. I think it was stated that Nick's mother resides in New Coventry, at least in Nick's Story I think it was, so why would they leave Los Angeles to move into shitty Bullworth and shitty New Coventry if they were wealthy enough to pay Nick's karate lessons? Then, I think that 5th dan (or 4th dan it was?) is too much for a 15-year-old kid so I think it would be good if he made all that up only to not end up as an outcast or something.

[BloodChuckZ]

@ Repo....Has already been established that Nick & Mother moved to Bullworth from Los Angles, and that Nick stated he has 4th Dan Black Belt, and went to a Dojo there.  No other back story exists so far as to his origins before that. 

Introducing the element that he was born in Jersey, son of a gangster father is still a good back story, we will just need a element to explain the move to Los Angeles (Nick's Mother wanting to remove him from that sort of Mob influnce, maybe ?), and no explaination as yet as to why he was brought to Bullworth. Living in a slum Los Angeles area doesn't mean that they couldn't afford lessons or whatever....There are plenty of Dojos in the inner-city areas of L.A.

Then again, Nicky's family's past mob connections could be the reason he was brought to Bullworth somehow.....



@ Mike....No, I fully expected that that part would continue....As I'm sure the Greasers and others would continue to buy from other (Townie) sources in the Bullworth Town-New Coventry-Blue Skies area just as they did before.  Tony's interest was that the Bullies not sell on campus, further upsetting the balance of the Clique structure.

Are you still planning for the Bullies to mount an Attack on Harrington Hall to locate and steal the other shield ?  Best to strike soon before the Preps re-unite.

[Mike_W]

Yeah, I still have to write the part about the Bullies taking the shield. Remind me again, which Preps are residing in the HH now that they are split?