NES Comments

[Mike_W]

 Sorry man, I don't care for it either, but its Vance and Gord we're talking about here.  It will all be over soon.  I tried to keep it as short as possible while still trying to keep key information in the story to make everything fit together and make sense.

[Repo Man]

Well ok, but yo Mike your stories all involve shit, gay stuff and all that... 

[Mike_W]

 The gay stuff is only there because its what is seperating members of the cliques.  Trust me man, I want to be done with it as much as you do.   As for the shit, thats in their becasue its funny all the time!

[BloodChuckZ]

Most of the gay set-up stuff is done, as there are only 5 gay/bisexuals in the Cliques, and I believe Mike has covered them all.

Now, will be the fallout for them being 'Outed'.

Awaiting the big boxing match now, after that, I have next part ready to go...

[Repo Man]

Will they return to their cliques or be abandoned forever?

[Mike_W]

 I don't know yet, we'll see how the story goes and fit them in where it is appropriate.

[BloodChuckZ]

That's just it, Repo....We don't know yet....

When writing, even the characters I write about do surprising things that I didn't figure them doing when I began writing that part....They just sorta pull you into their story....

Example, I had no idea Kurt was gonna kiddnap Pinky until he actually did....

[BloodChuckZ]

OK, I'm gonna put in a 'filler' part while we're waiting on the fight details. 

I still got another part ready for after the fight I wrote yesterday.  But you guys do really good with the individual fight sequences, so I guess I'll wait on that.

[Mike_W]

 Haha, that filler was great! Poor Trent

[Repo Man]

Hey what about something like "Endless Summer" when the story is over? Like, no antagonists, just normal life of students in Bullworth Academy.

[Mike_W]

 I was thinking the exact same thing, endless summer could be fun.

[Repo Man]

It doesn't have to be just summer, but just a story with description of normal life of characters. Like everyday life in Bullworth Academy. Without antagonists, without big plots. It may be kinda boring, but there's nothing else to write about once the story is over and Jake is "defeated".

[Mike_W]

Hmmm, we could even start the school year again with new students!

[BloodChuckZ]

Well, gang....Let's not get ahead of ourselves....I just want to get the story finished to the end of the Bullworth school year at this point....Then, we'll see if we have time to do an 'Endless Summer' afterwords.

Reason I say this....Some of us remember how we lost BB last April, and it got rescued at the midnight hour.  And next April is 6 months away. 

If we continue after that, all well and good.  BUT, if not, I'd at least like to get the core story done.  We are at about 170,000 words now, but just at the halfway point.  And, as someone pointed out, It's been a year since we started the story.

[Repo Man]

Now we have to get the match done. I'm out of ideas, only thing that it's on my mind for the match is just punching between Derby and Nick. Someone contribute to that.