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« Reply #465 on: September 30, 2010, 09:33:06 AM »
 I like it!  I can't wait to see what you have in store, this is much more in depth than what I originally had in mind.  This is going to be good!
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« Reply #466 on: September 30, 2010, 03:30:05 PM »
Preps play with power, we know that. And the way you said Harrington & Spencer "families" gave me an idea.
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« Reply #467 on: October 01, 2010, 03:22:24 PM »
Check out the parts I added, I thought of these parts yesterday and couldn't wait to add them. :)
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« Reply #468 on: October 01, 2010, 06:37:41 PM »
Haha poor Luntz! :)
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« Reply #469 on: October 01, 2010, 08:53:50 PM »
New fighting: Bif vs Norton and soon Nick will face Derby in a boxing match. Nick is a fine boxer, but don't make it easy for him...
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« Reply #470 on: October 01, 2010, 09:00:41 PM »
We should really find Nick a girl. Melody, maybe?
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« Reply #471 on: October 01, 2010, 10:23:04 PM »
Haha, good luck to Nick if he hooks up with Melody.
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« Reply #472 on: October 02, 2010, 07:09:39 AM »
I think Mercury is trying to hook Nick up with Christy.....

Couple of comments....Try to avoid specific dates in your story, except holidays.  We currently are in the latter part of January, around the third week.  Chapter 3 is being targered to come to an end on Valentine's Day.  There is still a whole lot of plot devlopment to center on Jake's plan to get the Cliques squabbling among themselves before then.  Since we have ended every chapter so far with a big event, at Halloween (bombongs) and Christmas (shootings), There will have to be another big event at the only upcoming holiday, Valentine's Day.  And for right now, we only have about half of Chapter 3 done.  All of those mentions of specific dates should be removed.

BTW, the target for Chapter 4 to end will be Easter, and Chapter 5 will end at the end of the school year.

Don't forget that Fatty has a full-lengh cast on his badly-broken leg, and will have for quite some time.
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« Reply #473 on: October 02, 2010, 10:04:41 AM »
 I'll go do something about the dates. Fatty can still walk though, but with crutches.  I assume that's how he gets around since there was no mention of a wheelchair.

-oh yeah, Chuck, you may want to go back to your latest post and change Kirby's name to Derby; about half way down. ;)
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« Reply #474 on: October 02, 2010, 11:15:57 AM »
Shit...Did I do that ?  (bangs head on table).....

OK, fixed.  Glad you caught that Mike !
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« Reply #475 on: October 02, 2010, 11:19:14 AM »
Trent became pretty unpopular, even among his clique. I don't know for how much the rest of the Bullies will allow a fag as their boss.
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« Reply #476 on: October 02, 2010, 11:38:12 AM »
Kirby will be next, or is that Derby.... :p  The only difference is that Kirby is not a leader.  He will be disowned by his friends, I'll have to come up with something.
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« Reply #477 on: October 02, 2010, 11:53:38 AM »
Chrissy is a pretty girl, but she's taller and older than Nick...Karen and Gloria are already "busy", and Melody is the only remaining non-clique girl. As for the clique girls, the only remaining are Mandy and Pinky, but they're both bitches.
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« Reply #478 on: October 02, 2010, 01:08:42 PM »
Yeah, well, why wouldn't Nick go after the best, even if she is a bit older ?

Personally, I was thinking Melody, or maybe even Angie, for Nick (since he was supposed to take her out).....But I don't really care.

You and Mercury work that out....But, my opinion, Nick's your character, you should be the one to pick the girl.
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« Reply #479 on: October 02, 2010, 02:28:10 PM »
You gotta know it will be easy for Nick if he wishes to hook up with Christy. Then, for some reason, he can decide to find another girl... We decide.
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