NES Questions

[BloodChuckZ]

Cute !  Actually, only one is going to graduate.  The rest will fail to do so because of all the missed class time over the prior two years.

Next up will be "Endless Summer"......And all the kids get to go to summer school to make up lost credits !!

[BloodChuckZ]

Oh...I'm down to the final few days now.  There will also be a short epilog.

[Mike_W]

I'll have to run my ideas by you and see what you think. Sort of Like a GTA meets CSI with Bully and GTA characters thrown in the mix. A story about Tony and his friends once they're out of school and surrounding their adult lives.

[Red Blaster]

Well, it's not a question...more like an issue. I noticed this part of the story: "Bob SMASH bomber!" as well as his other quote.

Why'd you make Bob like some dumb bruiser? He's actually the smartest jock (and probably the nicest one, too) if you listen to his audio files.

P.S. You also might notice I made an edit. I just corrected the spelling for "whimp". Lol.

[BloodChuckZ]

I've never heard his audio files.  Since he was a deleted character, I just brought him in as part of the storyline to make Russell back down and also to strengthen the Jocks more.  And though his limited NES dialogue may make him appear to be a 'Dumb Jock', there's a lot more cookin' in that ole noggin of his than anybody really suspects.

Note that Ted placed him as second-in-command earlier in the chapter.



Also, I liked his size, and decided to make him a giant for the story, sort of a more intimidating presence.   

[-мα∂нαттяι¢к-]

Chuck just wanted to say, this story is awesome! I read it from time to time, and the writing is always great. Keep it up!

[BloodChuckZ]

The Main Body of the story is now complete.  We will follow Tony and his friends now throughout the 'Endless Summer'.

[BloodChuckZ]

Planning on a Clique of Girls coming in from Reform School, and I need names.  I might...might be open to using some of the Girls' names on site here, but I would need your permission to do so.  Maybe, just the first letter of the name would be better ? 

Anyhoo, suggestions would be welcome.

[Red Blaster]

What kind of names are you aiming for?

Innocent, tough, bitchy, posh, nerdy, eccentric...?

[BloodChuckZ]

Reform School Girls.  Tough & Bitchy, I would suppose.

[BloodChuckZ]

The new Girl Clique members will be....

(blacks) Shideed**, Ladonna*, Whitney, Katrina,  + (white) Tess, Carla, Tiffany, Hayley.

**clique leader  *Second-in-command

The Clique is still unnamed, thinking the “Reform Clique”

Others will be specific targeted Clique girls.....

(Prep) Vanessa,  (Jock) Paige,  (Greaser) Binky,  (Nerd) Jimmette,  (Bully) Sloane.

Unattached Non-Cliques.......

Hannah, Claire, Joan, Jessica, Nina, Amber, Misty.

Have fleshed out a few of the personalities, particularly the Clique ones.  But will take suggestions on the Non-Clique girls.

Jimmette & Binky have already been introduced.   

[BloodChuckZ]

The Bullworth NES has now passed 25,000 views, a milestone of sorts.  I have noticed a large rise in the 'readership' since the finish of the main story body last July (from 22K to 25K)......

Now, since there are a limited number of us here, even fewer that have been following the story, that means the bulk of the 'hits' have come from the outside, via the 'guests'.

My question would be directed towards those Guests.  In these times when we have those who take the time & trouble to actually join the site but never post, perhaps some guests who read this could do likewise, just join up for the purpose of leaving a comment here on the story, and why in particular they are following it, how they like the characters, etc.

In any event, I'd like to thank all that do read and follow the NES, even if I never hear from you.     

[BloodChuckZ]

^ Well, that bombed out.  I do wonder if anyone here is still following the story ?  The view hits now outnumber my post count, and are fast rising to 26,000. 

The stage is being set for a tense, exciting event that will involve Tony and those near and dear to him.  I have slowed down the rate of the story, due to RL things I had to get done.  But, I'm gonna try to pick up the pace soon.

[JmTsHaW]

I still follow this, it's pretty good

[Mohamed The Kowalski]

I still do too.