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Anti-Bully / Bottom 5 Moments
« on: April 04, 2007, 08:43:37 AM »Quote from: LadyLuckDoubt;45260
2. The last two chapters felt incredibly hastily done, and the plot became really silly and kind of irrevelent- there hadn't been enough building up to it. It would be like if J. K. Rowling had written the last Lord of the Rings book.
3. Gary could have featured a bit more. Given that he was the bad guy, you expected to see him a lot more... or at least I did.
Hear hear. From all the points mentioned here, these are the only ones I totally agree with. Well, and the ones involving Gary... xD