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Bully 1 Discussion / Bully Storyline REWRITTEN Part III

« on: September 07, 2016, 09:13:31 AM »

With Bullies now under our control and Gary no longer in the mix, its time to exploit our influence to a clique we have already interacted with in the last chapter, Preps. Chapter III will be focused on helping Preps and doing missions with them, a theme that is going to stay through the rest of the game. We spend 2 chapters with one clique. the first one is getting to know them, and the second one is taking them over. Also, since Chapter I and II were introductoy, storyline missions are increased to 15. So, lets go


Chapter III: Rick Kid Blues


MISSIONS


1. The Noble Art And All That (Gord would like if you came down to the OBV and their gym. Basically, a three part boxing mission where you would box Preps in a "friendly" way. If you purposely injure them, you fail the mission).

2. Boy Becomes A Man ( Parker, who is a nice guy, but is struggling with women, asks of you to help him. He finally found a girl to take her out, but he has anxiety. This mission would be a mix of Movie Tickets and Edna's Date, where you make sure Parker doesn't screw up. )


3. Carnival Date (Pinky heard about you and your nice deeds, so she is interested. Same mission as before)


4. The Eggs (Tad asks you to egg Hattircks manor with your fellow Preps. Gary doesn't interrupt and you actually do egg his house. From now on, you HAVE to wear Aquaberry stuff if you want to do Prep missions)


5. Justin's Wish ( Justin would like to try out for the football team, but Derby opposes it. Its up to you to make sure the other Preps don't show up while Justin is playing)


6. Shopping Spree ( Gord hasn't bought anything in days, so you must join him on his shopping spree. Of course, Greasers are there to disturb you at all times)


7. Wrong Part Of Town ( Now we are ready to start the Prep vs Greaser rivalry. Chad has a date with Lola, but its in New Coventry. You must pick him up before he gets his ass whooped. Same mission as before with you shooting Greasers while Chad pedals)


8. Hard Times Of Bryce Montrose ( Bryce's family is having debts all around, and he can't catch up with work at the club to pay his way at school. A bartending mission basically, where Greasers show up again. Oh, and the club is in New Conventry too ).


9. No Chin, No Problem ( Tad's brother is a psycho, but he misses him, so you have to get him out of the Insane Asylum. A stealth mission)


10. Bif's The Best..Around ( Greasers, those sons of bitches just beat Gord, Chad and Parker up to a bloody pulp. Bif challenges Johnny to a massive fight, in The Hole and you and the other Preps have to make sure the other Greasers don't interfere. Fight ends up in a no contest, because Derby shows up for the first time and berates you and Bif)



11. Blue Blood Meets Red ( Tad has asked you to come to his house. His dad found out his brother escaped from the Asylum and he is whooping both of them. A boss fight between you and Tad's father . I know, a bit crazy, but it's different. Tad and his bro would obviously help you, since you are fighting a jacked up, 45 year old man. Cops arrive and put Tad's dad in the asylum instead)


12. Tagging ( Darby wants you to get revenge for what happened to Chad, Gord and Parker. He sends Bryce and Bif with you so you can tag New Conventry entirely. More tension between you and Derby)


13. Rich and Crazy ( Pinky is horny, and wants another date with you.)


14. Coming Out Party (Derby found out about Justin's love for sports and is beating him up when Jimmy shows up. Even more tension is teased, but Bif breaks you guys apart. Derby says if he loses tonight's game, Justin is out of the clique. Another "make sure the person does ok" mission.)


15.The Rumble (Greaseballs have had enough and have invited Preps for a massive fight. Derby wants none of it, and walks away. The injured Preps are now fine and you, along with them, go to Conventry to brawl. Cops would show up, Preps and Greasers would be fighting, Johnny and Bif and you and Peanut. Derby shows up and  escorts you back to the gym. Derby commands Bif to stop fighting pointless battles and slaps him. Jimmy snaps and he punches Derby leading to a boss fight. Before you can finish Derby off, Bif stops it and tells you to leave. Derby also proclaims you are a dead man. That is the end of Chapter III)



Thoughts? 

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Bully 1 Discussion / Bully Storyline REWRITTEN Part II

« on: September 07, 2016, 05:59:44 AM »

So, in the first part we covered Chapter I. Now that we have established our friendship with Gary and Pete, it's time to kick Russell's ass.

Chapter II: The Name Is Hopkins


As I have said before, this Chapter is going to be focused on The Squad vs The Bullies. Save Algie involved Bullies, but I am going to be changing it to Save Petey. Also, Setup, Defend Bucky and the last two missions are still here, just done differently. Also, worth mentioning: in my missions, we target every clique member based on their individual characteristics, as you will see now.



MISSIONS


1. Senpai Ethan ( now, we know Ethan knows a lot about martial arts. Well, who in school are objectively the best fighters? Preps, so we are going to exploit that. Basically, you would leave clues in The Harrington House in Chad's room a few times, before he finally has enough and challenges Ethan, and whoops his ass)



2. The Setup ( stays the same, except you won't be talking to Crabblesnitch, but to Gary. )


3. Preps Bullied ( Tom, who we know for an unknown reason hates the Preps, wants revenge. Russell is not an intelligent guy, so he is going to be missing for now. Basically, you and Preps would prepare for a fight and it would be up to you if you want to partake or not: )

4. Save Petey ( Gary asks you to escort Petey from the Dorm to the school, but be careful, Bullies are pissed off now that you triggered them. Our target now is Wade, who has anger issues. Jimmy would have to lure him into fighting him by yelling stuff about his dad while Pete gets his stuff from his locker.)


5. A Bully's Secret ( Gary and Petey inform you that they have been hearing rumors about Trent's... orientation. Another stealth mission where you would follow Trent to the gym, and take pictures of him and Kirby on a date. Then, you would plant those pics in Bullies dorm room, so they all laugh at him lol. )


6. Defend Gary ( Pete is worried cuz Gary went to the parking lot to bully Nerds, but he is not coming back. Same mission as before, just a different area.)


7. Having Fun ( Troy is a tough guy, so how do you beat a tough guy. You beat his ass. Troy would actually be the guy we fought in the introductory mission, not Davis, so now, Troy wants a rematch and he is a lot tougher than before. A mini boss fight.)



8. A Failed Project Part Two (Gary tells you that last year, Russell broke a science project over Donald's head. Jimmy now has to intimidate Donald into taking it again so Russell gets in trouble.)


9. Help Gary (stays the same, but Pete is involved too and also involves a mini game and a cutscene where you would be training with Gary and Pete to beat Russell. Same betrayal at the end, but for different reasons. Gary didn't betray you cuz he stopped taking meds; it's because he saw your potential in the combat art, but nothing more, so he is getting rid of you since brains always beat brawns)


10. The Rematch (not Russell In The Hole, its The Rematch. Stays the same, but weapons are not allowed in The Hole AND Russell is still tough, just not as much as before. Same cutscene in the end, now we are somwehat popular .D. That is the end of Chapter II)


Thoughts? 

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Introduce Yourself / Bully Storyline REWRITTEN Part I

« on: September 06, 2016, 05:08:56 PM »

Hi everyone, my names is Dante and I am going to be rewriting Bully's storyline. I love this game, but the plot is a little bit too rushed. So, here we go


CHAPTER I: The Arrival

In the regular game, you work your way through Bullies and you also do a few missions with Gary and Pete before the swerve at the end. Lets not do that lol. In the begginning, for this entire chapter, all we are doing are missions with Gary and Pete, separately and together. I should mention that in my Bully, every chapter has 10 main and 15 side missions, so keep that in mind. I would keep The Halloween and Big Prank here, but both of them would be longer with more pranks and comedy.  We are keeping Hobo's mission and This Is Your School since those are introductory, but we are taking Save Bucky, Candidate, That Bitch, Save Algie and Help Gary out, since most of those are related to Nerds and Bullies. Overall, this chapter would introduce you to the school, the cliques and the activities, while also establishing your friendship with Pete and Gary. The final mission would actually be the Halloween, where for the first time you bump into The Bullies and Russell knocks you out. Time wise, this chapter is a month long.



Missions

1. Welcome To Bullworth
2. This Is Your School
3. Love At First Sight (this is the errand mission for Pete, but it would be longer and also involving you flirting with Eunice again so Pete can talk to Beatrice in peace)
4. Feel The Spirit (an introductory mission to bullying with Gary, where you two would pick on three random losers in school. The objective is to embarrass that person as much as you can until they retaliate against you, so you can beat them up)
5. A Little Help
6. Petey In Needey ( Bucky is pissed off you have been hitting on Beatrice, so its up to you to embarass him in front of Dr.Wtatts)
7. Trouble Maker ( Gary, being the prick he is, gives you 5 tasks to see if you are as tough as the rumors are saying. Basically, you would pull the fire alarm, punch a prefect, ditch class, smoke outside ( yes that is a thing in my world), until you finally get caught and punished. Basically, introduction to detention and truancy)
8. Fight Club ( Gary and Pete welcome you to The Hole. In this mission, you either have the option to bet on someone or particpate yourself. Entirely up to you)
9. Big Prank ( I would add a part where you, Gary and Pete would sneak into the school to steal awesome costumes from Miss Peters hall. Then, the mission stays the same)
10. Halloween ( same, but longer with 10 pranks. In this mission, you would prank 1 member of each faction plus 3 Non Clique people. Mission ends with The Squad getting back to the dorm, where Russell is bullying Pedro. Boss fight happens where Russell obliterates you. It would be programmed so you can't really do anything to him. Pete and Gary help you get back up, and warn you who you just messed with. Jimmy, who up to this point didn't want to take over the school would change his mind and say " It's time Bullworth meets Jimmy Hopkins". And that is how Chapter I would end).


Thoughts?