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Title: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: Mick3Mouse on November 29, 2013, 08:11:11 PM

BullyZ Episode 2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRfbsV9MrMo#)


:)

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: BloodChuckZ on November 30, 2013, 03:35:05 AM

Excellent, Mick !!  I liked that a lot ! 
Nice, the 30 seconds of "Previously on...."
Background sounds are spot on.
Story so far is easy to follow.
Props all around for this Vid.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: SWEGTA on November 30, 2013, 05:19:02 AM

Could have used some sounds effects during the fights.
But still, it's a cool show! Props, Mick!  :)

I think Ray is a pretty good sidecharacter as well, due to his touch of humour on the show.
Hopefully we'll get to see Ray get eaten by a mob of zombies or something. I doubt he will survive long mainly due to his cowardness and his increadibly slow running speed.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: Mick3Mouse on November 30, 2013, 06:23:05 AM

Thanks :)

I promise  the  next episode will be atleast 7 min long.  5 min is too short. 

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: c00ld0c26 on November 30, 2013, 07:25:26 AM

Great so far Mick.
There are a few things you can do better :

(*) the story is a bit to simple atlist for me, propebly you could spice it up a bit, make it a bit more complax.

(*) Sound effects, you do use them but a lot of them are needed at diffrent spots.

(*) Skins would be a good addition to the machinima.

Except for those 3 it was excellent.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: WhenLifeGivesYouLemons on November 30, 2013, 11:36:23 AM

 :euro: wonderful!  :euro:

nice mick.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: BloodChuckZ on November 30, 2013, 02:13:25 PM

Still....Any story has to start simply and build, characters & storylines have to be added a bit at a time.  As for the sound effects, yes, some punching sounds while fighting should be added, but the sounds the 'Zombies' makes while attacking and eating is real good, and I particularly like the banging sounds on the doors, it adds drama.  It's only the second video, plenty of time to grow more complex, let's see what he adds as this series stretches on.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: SWEGTA on November 30, 2013, 02:50:52 PM

I felt like the main character Ivan was killed off too early though.
Currently waiting to find out who the main survivors will be.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: Mick3Mouse on November 30, 2013, 03:13:33 PM

:O

Maby the bullies. i dont know.  actully xD

LOOL

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: SWEGTA on November 30, 2013, 03:38:26 PM

Quote from: Mick3Mouse on November 30, 2013, 03:13:33 PM

:O

Maby the bullies. i dont know.  actully xD

LOOL

Bad Grammar Overload (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O9mGZCOc4xw#)
When do you think the next episode will be up?

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: c00ld0c26 on November 30, 2013, 05:44:17 PM

Quote from: SWEGTA on November 30, 2013, 03:38:26 PM

Quote from: Mick3Mouse on November 30, 2013, 03:13:33 PM

:O

Maby the bullies. i dont know.  actully xD

LOOL

Bad Grammar Overload (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O9mGZCOc4xw#)
When do you think the next episode will be up?

LOL, Chuck was right ,I got killed by laughter.

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: BloodChuckZ on November 30, 2013, 06:47:19 PM

^ I just knew it, somehow.   :laugh:

Title: Re: BullyZ Episode 2
Post by: KING DP on December 01, 2013, 09:35:23 AM

wow that was awesome Mick funny part was when Petey bites Fireman lol that good voice