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Bully => Community Stories => Topic started by: Nanomachines,son on June 06, 2013, 08:07:30 PM

Title: BULLY: ANGRY GRANDPAS STORY
Post by: Nanomachines,son on June 06, 2013, 08:07:30 PM
One day, Charles Green AKA The Angry Grandpa was sent to Bullworth. He got surrounded by a group a people wearing white t-shirts. Angry Grandpa smashed their faces in. He then went to meet the principal, Mr. Crabblesnitch. After that, he went to his dorm room. It had a computer. so he went on YouTube and looked at his channel. It turns out Micheal closed it! Now Angry Grandpa was pissed. So he took the hammer out and smashed the computer.
Title: Re: BULLY: ANGRY GRANDPAS STORY
Post by: Hyaenidae on June 16, 2013, 12:16:31 AM
goodbye
Title: Re: BULLY: ANGRY GRANDPAS STORY
Post by: SWEGTA on June 16, 2013, 09:42:37 AM
I like the basics of the story, but the writing could really use some work.
Everythng was introduced in a milisecond and very unclear.

Who is Michael by the way?
Title: Re: BULLY: ANGRY GRANDPAS STORY
Post by: Nanomachines,son on June 16, 2013, 09:51:26 PM
The cameraman of Angry Grandpa. He is also called pickle boy
Title: Re: BULLY: ANGRY GRANDPAS STORY
Post by: Evolution on June 17, 2013, 01:34:09 AM
SWEGTA, what the fuck are you talking about? The story is amazing!