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Title: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: SWEGTA on January 31, 2015, 09:18:06 PM: BULLY SE : Undead (EPISODE 1) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Mt6dNOPR-8#)

Let me know what you think.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Davidlam on February 01, 2015, 12:42:46 AM: Pretty off looks great
But after minute 10:00, when the night comes,
it gets pretty dark and I can't see a thing, I mean their face & It is hard to tell who speak to who
I know it is night, but still....
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 01, 2015, 02:55:18 AM: WOW.....my brain is bleeding from ecstasy....WOW.
(https://howaboutasecondopinion.files.wordpress.com/2014/05/peter_griffin-1117.jpg)

Real nice intro scenes.
Background Music...Spot on.
Plot opening....Excellent.
Name of Wife (Danielle ...?), couldn't quite catch.
Why is Tim headed to the Academy ?
Nice buildup and groundwork for first episode.
New characters at the end a draw to watch Episode 2.
Great camera angles.
Sets mood.

CHARACTERS SO FAR....
Carl
Carl's wife (Danielle...?)
Ed (her father, unseen ?)
Tim
Ben
Sondra
Elliott

Rating : 9.97
Another Walkers++ in the making.

"A must see for all Bullworth Zombie fans !!" -- BloodChuckZ Times & Review.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: DaBOSS54320 on February 01, 2015, 04:11:33 AM: Great intro, only 2 complaints...

1) Sometimes it feels like the audio isn't balanced. Like one character will be really loud, when the other is quiet, and I have to keep adjusting my volume. It'd make sense if one was screaming and one was whispering, but even at the same tone.

2) The car windows changes colors between scenes... (Try VehicleSetColor(Car,1) or VehicleSetColor(Car,54))
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: SWEGTA on February 01, 2015, 05:33:17 AM: Thanks for the feedback, guys.
I'll make sure to note this down for episode 2 when I start rolling with it.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 01, 2015, 08:22:14 AM: Anyway, looking forward to another great series. ;D

The SWEGTA Legend builds, the Bullworth Serial King !!
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: alontzedaka on February 01, 2015, 08:40:58 AM: Nice. Thanks for making me main char btw bro.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Davidlam on February 01, 2015, 10:23:14 AM: Quote from: alontzedaka on February 01, 2015, 08:40:58 AM
Nice. Thanks for making me main char btw bro.
I think, it is more like, thanks for making me to fill the voice of the main char
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 01, 2015, 07:36:34 PM: Eh, same difference, really.
Was that Chrissy as Carl's wife, or Sondra ?
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Red Blaster on February 01, 2015, 10:53:04 PM: ^ Neither. It was just a random person from youtube.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: alontzedaka on February 02, 2015, 12:19:51 AM: "Random person" K.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Red Blaster on February 02, 2015, 02:49:23 AM: I don't really know her name. =P Swegta didn't mention who it was. Just some person who volunteered.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Mick3Mouse on February 02, 2015, 04:14:12 AM: I think it's weird that the main character didn't gave a fuck about his girlfriend. He hasn't talked about her girlfriend like if she's okay or anything.

And the voices is high and sometimes low, which is very annoying. But apart from that, it was pretty fucking amazing.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 02, 2015, 04:22:10 AM: Well, he did go back looking for her, but she wasn't there. And, she was a wife, not a GF.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: Mick3Mouse on February 02, 2015, 04:23:43 AM: Well... I might missed that, i watched this when i was going to sleep. Might have been slept that part, lol.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 02, 2015, 04:37:29 AM: I was sorta at the start, conversation right before they were in the store ("You're the one who who married me") at 1:22.
Then they talked about naming the baby "AJ", which means she must be pregnant.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: alontzedaka on February 02, 2015, 08:55:30 AM: I just can't get off the feeling I "Boned" someone in virtual staged reality.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 02, 2015, 09:06:27 AM: Or, going to be an expectant Father of Baby "AJ" either, I'll bet.
Congratulations !! Here, have a Cigar !
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: alontzedaka on February 02, 2015, 09:34:03 AM: Quote from: BloodChuckZ on February 02, 2015, 09:06:27 AM
Or, going to be an expectant Father of Baby "AJ" either, I'll bet.
Congratulations !! Here, have a Cigar !

That is unless my wife died...

Or better yet got infected and I can maul AJ with a sledgehammer..Oh boy.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: SWEGTA on February 02, 2015, 11:06:01 AM: Party Whistle Sound - Ringtone (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cM77Cvhbok#)

You're a man now, Alon. It's time to drop the youngster life and take responsibility.
First and foremost, you must find a way to support your wife and newborn baby.

Second of all, you must now drive the little rascal to daycare 5 times a week.
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: BloodChuckZ on February 02, 2015, 12:34:56 PM: Don't forget to change the smelly pissy diapers !
That's always loads of fun !!
Title: Re: UNDEAD - EPISODE 1
Post by: SWEGTA on February 04, 2015, 05:18:53 AM: Virtual pissy diapers, Chuck. Virtual.

I've already begun writing episode 2 a couple of days ago.
Hopefully it'll be done by the 20th or do.

After that I'm jumping straight to episode 3, so I can keep the audience's interest.
The d0c will also be giving a diagnosis on the quality of the script and what we should do next.

Tons of people on this project. More than I expected.