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Bully => Video Stories => Topic started by: Mick3Mouse on June 30, 2013, 08:32:35 AM
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This is my Zombie movie. Hope you liked.
BullyZ Episode 1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeXgZv5RtOU#ws)
This is a trailer and an mini episode. Other episodes is going to be better and longer. :)
Made with Machinama Maker mod.
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Hey, that was actually good !!! Enjoyed it and Laughed all at the same time. :biggrin:
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Thanks :)
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Thank you man! :)
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That was actuly good, but I see stuff missing.
1. If you want to make a zombie series, get zombie skins and put them on, it will improve a lot.
2. Ricky hears someone scream and comes 20 minutes later?
3. Camera shots - Dont get the same place with one shot, do it from multiple places for example : When Ricky gets in the bus, change the view so he will be walking inside the bus towereds the camera, when he is about to get out, put the camera behind him showing he is leaving the bus.
Take a few camera shots all around, not just from 1 point, it will make the video more intresting.
Except of those 3, your video was good.
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This was meant to be a trailer. Next episodes will be better.
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Yeah, but it's not like work shouldn't be put into trailers. The better the execution, the higher the chances are you will grab the audience's interest.
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i know :( but i promise it will be better. next episode.
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It's good that you're promising that.
I like the basics of this show, but try and create some sort of storyline or purpose.
I failed to do so with Walkers. Mainly because it start off in the middle of the zombie apocalyptic universe and because not much is known about the characters past.
Try and build up the characters, have events take place between them.
I know that this is a trailer, but it feels more like a small leaked unfinished footage from a zombie flick. Try and make us know that there is depth and story behind this very short video. That there is a storyline worth focusing on.
Otherwise, I love the idea. And the sound effects are a nice touch.
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Yeah, but it's not like work shouldn't be put into trailers. The better the execution, the higher the chances are you will grab the audience's interest.
Red is right.
I think bully wasn't so populer like GTA series, cuz the trailers didn't have much action.
To tell the truth, I didn't got bully cuz I saw the trailer and I said "OMG I want this game!", I just bought the game 1 time in ps2 without knowing shit about it.
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Heh, I didn't know shit about Bully either, I just picked it out of the bin because I liked the artwork on the cover and the description on the back. Plus, It was a Rockstar game, and I was already heavy into the Manhunt games.
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Chuck u just described how I bought the game 100% HAHAHA
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Cool trailer when is the first episode coming out?
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Soon! :)