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Community Stories / my story for bully 2
« on: December 06, 2011, 11:30:33 PM »
my idea has an entirely new character. Joel Floyd.a mean, cocky, smart-mouthed, 15 year old who follows his own rules and attacks anyone in his way. haveing been expelled from every school he attanded for various reasons including,fighting,stealing,pranks and mischief,skipping,vandalism,intamacy on school grounds during class,possesion of a dangerous weapon, possesion of a non-dangerous weapon, possesion of a lethal weapon,smoking, and use of alchoholic beverages. no school would accept him this year...except one. "The Radiant Sun Academy"(R.S.A) for troubled youth, or basicaly a dumping ground for troublmakers that has a nice sounding name. the school is in the town of Rayston.
the spots where the ... and blank space appears are the gap in between missions that im skipping
CHAPTER I-swords, games, and lies
it starts with Joel in the office."remember i'm watching you JOEL" said headmaster knudsen,saying joels name in disgust. "yea yea sure, whatever" said joel. "get out of my office and go put on your uniform you brat!" says knudsen. "FINE!" said joel walking out of the office and heading towards the boys dorm...outside the dorm a guy gets up off the steps and walks in front of joel. "sup new kid? names tevin" he said thrusting out his hand to shake joels. joel shakes tevins hand and says "hey tevin names Joel" tevin laughed " i no your name already" said tevin "the whole school does. i wanted to get to you before those jerks waiting inside the dorm did" he said smiling and tilting his head indicating the boys dorm right up the steps. "what do you mean?" said joel narrowing his eyes and staring at tevin coldly. "im just warning you that there are guys waiting in the to give you the new kid initiation" he said cooly "thought i should warn you to use the back door" "thanks." said joel "dont mention it, but remember you owe me...i just saved you from getting hit with 10 balloons full of piss" he said laughing "now i gotta go to class. see ya around new kid" and with that tevin ran off. joel walked around back and used the emergency exit door out back to enter. he took the key the lady in the office gave him.it had a 23 carved into the handle,heguessed it was his room number. he walked up the stairs and went to the second door on the left, opening the door with the 23 on the door with his key, he entered and got changed, putting o the school uniform. a white long sleeve shirt covered by a red t-shirt with the school cest on the left shoulder. then he heard the big front door of te door open and heard the other new kids screaming while they got hit with the balloons. joel chuckld to himself, he could get used to it here...
joel went to his classes. chemistry was ok, but math sucked. tevin walked up while he was walking down the steps. "sup new kid?" he asked. "my name is joel" said joel "not new kid" tevin grinned "ok joel. so whats up?" "nothing much" said joel. "so made any friends yet?" tevin asked with a grin "any one whos in a clique?" "a what?"said joel. "you know... a group of people who hang out together. here let me shown you" said tevin, as they walked into the cafeteria for dinner. "there are 6 cliques in this school. those are the geeks" he said pointing to a table with a bunch of kids wearing only the red school shirt without the white long sleeve...but there cllothes where filthy like they hadnt changed in days "they are led by Gabe" he sid pointing to the biggest kid at the table,who wasplaying W.O.W on a laptop."gamer nerds and anime fags" said joel "very good!"said tevin "and those are the richies" he pointed to a group of nicly dressed students with nice designer jackets that had the school crest stitched into them "their leader is rodney" he said pointing to the one standing at the head of the table who looked particularly rich "rich dumb jerks who think money is everything" observed joel "yep" said tevin "those are the goths" he said pointing to a bunch of kids wearing heavy chains,black boots, and black jackets "there leader is nico" he indicated the youngest member who was sitting at the edge of the table "isnt he a little young?" aked joel "yea but he inherited the leadership from his brother whe he graduated last year." said tevin. "those are the thugs and skaters" pointing at 2 groups who were sharing a table,1 group whereing ripped up jeans, and gray shirts, and the other groups members were whereing sweatshirts,jeans, and hats, most holding skateboards under their arms, or having them sticking out of their backpacks, they were making a circle around a 2 members of both clique who were playing cards. "ross leads the thugs and trane leads the skaters" said joel indicating the 2 playing cards. ross was short and stocky but deffinently looked mean, with bruises and cuts all over his face, and trane who was tall but looked very tough. wereing a nice pair of jeans, and a nice looking skateboarding sweatshirt "thieves and poor kids" said joel dismisivly "yes, but thieves and poor kids that will beat the crap outta you" said tevin "then you got the redneck, party kids" he said pointing over towards the back wall where a bunch of kids were talking loud and being roudy.they all seemed to be wereing hunting and camo colors. "there led by ronny." he indicated the one that was being loudest,the one with long red hair and a crooked hunting cap on.joel didnt even comment "and last but not least... the foreign kids." said tevin point over to a croud in the corner. they mostly lookd like russians and germans, but joel saw a japenese kid in there as well, and some other nationality's. "just a bunch of kids who dont speak english" said joel with a shrug" "they are the biggest clique" said tevin "be careful not to piss them off or Anton and Adolph will beat the crap out of you." he said nodding toward the 2 guys in the middle of the group who were twins. they were both big, huge, russians who looked like they could kill someone without blinking an eye....
(saving tevin rogers)
after dinner they were heading towards the boys dorm when 4 people surrounded them, all wereing the red shirt that was dirty and stained. geeks. "gabe sends his regards" said one as they surrounded tevin. "gonna help me beat them joel?" he asked "not my fight" said joel as he tried to turn away but one pushed him back. " no ya dont new kid" he said "your gonna hang out with tevin then your gonna get beat with tevin" he said. "back off chuck or ill kick your a"started tevin but he got cut off when chuck threw a punch. tevin ducked under it and threw one back, nailing chuck in the face and knocking him down. 2 attacked joel at once, one grabbing his arms behind hs back and the other getting ready to punch him. joel kicked backwards catching the first guys shin and making him let go, then grabbed him and threw him into the other one. when he turned around the 3rd guy was on the ground, with tevin standing over him. they all got up and ran off around the corner of the building. "nice trick with that shin kick" said tevin "yea thanks." said joel "and now a whole clique hates me" "dont get mad" said tevin. "they hate me to" he said laughing "yea i noticed" said joel " and now im dragged in with you, and i repaid my favor. now you owe me" said joel. "hm. here he said" handing joel a skateboard. "i took it from a skater while he went to the bathroom" tevin said laughing "your gonna make 2 cliques mad at me!" joel said annoyed "i swear your gonna get me killed here" joel said as they walked to the boys dorm...
im working on more and will be done soon!
the spots where the ... and blank space appears are the gap in between missions that im skipping
CHAPTER I-swords, games, and lies
it starts with Joel in the office."remember i'm watching you JOEL" said headmaster knudsen,saying joels name in disgust. "yea yea sure, whatever" said joel. "get out of my office and go put on your uniform you brat!" says knudsen. "FINE!" said joel walking out of the office and heading towards the boys dorm...outside the dorm a guy gets up off the steps and walks in front of joel. "sup new kid? names tevin" he said thrusting out his hand to shake joels. joel shakes tevins hand and says "hey tevin names Joel" tevin laughed " i no your name already" said tevin "the whole school does. i wanted to get to you before those jerks waiting inside the dorm did" he said smiling and tilting his head indicating the boys dorm right up the steps. "what do you mean?" said joel narrowing his eyes and staring at tevin coldly. "im just warning you that there are guys waiting in the to give you the new kid initiation" he said cooly "thought i should warn you to use the back door" "thanks." said joel "dont mention it, but remember you owe me...i just saved you from getting hit with 10 balloons full of piss" he said laughing "now i gotta go to class. see ya around new kid" and with that tevin ran off. joel walked around back and used the emergency exit door out back to enter. he took the key the lady in the office gave him.it had a 23 carved into the handle,heguessed it was his room number. he walked up the stairs and went to the second door on the left, opening the door with the 23 on the door with his key, he entered and got changed, putting o the school uniform. a white long sleeve shirt covered by a red t-shirt with the school cest on the left shoulder. then he heard the big front door of te door open and heard the other new kids screaming while they got hit with the balloons. joel chuckld to himself, he could get used to it here...
joel went to his classes. chemistry was ok, but math sucked. tevin walked up while he was walking down the steps. "sup new kid?" he asked. "my name is joel" said joel "not new kid" tevin grinned "ok joel. so whats up?" "nothing much" said joel. "so made any friends yet?" tevin asked with a grin "any one whos in a clique?" "a what?"said joel. "you know... a group of people who hang out together. here let me shown you" said tevin, as they walked into the cafeteria for dinner. "there are 6 cliques in this school. those are the geeks" he said pointing to a table with a bunch of kids wearing only the red school shirt without the white long sleeve...but there cllothes where filthy like they hadnt changed in days "they are led by Gabe" he sid pointing to the biggest kid at the table,who wasplaying W.O.W on a laptop."gamer nerds and anime fags" said joel "very good!"said tevin "and those are the richies" he pointed to a group of nicly dressed students with nice designer jackets that had the school crest stitched into them "their leader is rodney" he said pointing to the one standing at the head of the table who looked particularly rich "rich dumb jerks who think money is everything" observed joel "yep" said tevin "those are the goths" he said pointing to a bunch of kids wearing heavy chains,black boots, and black jackets "there leader is nico" he indicated the youngest member who was sitting at the edge of the table "isnt he a little young?" aked joel "yea but he inherited the leadership from his brother whe he graduated last year." said tevin. "those are the thugs and skaters" pointing at 2 groups who were sharing a table,1 group whereing ripped up jeans, and gray shirts, and the other groups members were whereing sweatshirts,jeans, and hats, most holding skateboards under their arms, or having them sticking out of their backpacks, they were making a circle around a 2 members of both clique who were playing cards. "ross leads the thugs and trane leads the skaters" said joel indicating the 2 playing cards. ross was short and stocky but deffinently looked mean, with bruises and cuts all over his face, and trane who was tall but looked very tough. wereing a nice pair of jeans, and a nice looking skateboarding sweatshirt "thieves and poor kids" said joel dismisivly "yes, but thieves and poor kids that will beat the crap outta you" said tevin "then you got the redneck, party kids" he said pointing over towards the back wall where a bunch of kids were talking loud and being roudy.they all seemed to be wereing hunting and camo colors. "there led by ronny." he indicated the one that was being loudest,the one with long red hair and a crooked hunting cap on.joel didnt even comment "and last but not least... the foreign kids." said tevin point over to a croud in the corner. they mostly lookd like russians and germans, but joel saw a japenese kid in there as well, and some other nationality's. "just a bunch of kids who dont speak english" said joel with a shrug" "they are the biggest clique" said tevin "be careful not to piss them off or Anton and Adolph will beat the crap out of you." he said nodding toward the 2 guys in the middle of the group who were twins. they were both big, huge, russians who looked like they could kill someone without blinking an eye....
(saving tevin rogers)
after dinner they were heading towards the boys dorm when 4 people surrounded them, all wereing the red shirt that was dirty and stained. geeks. "gabe sends his regards" said one as they surrounded tevin. "gonna help me beat them joel?" he asked "not my fight" said joel as he tried to turn away but one pushed him back. " no ya dont new kid" he said "your gonna hang out with tevin then your gonna get beat with tevin" he said. "back off chuck or ill kick your a"started tevin but he got cut off when chuck threw a punch. tevin ducked under it and threw one back, nailing chuck in the face and knocking him down. 2 attacked joel at once, one grabbing his arms behind hs back and the other getting ready to punch him. joel kicked backwards catching the first guys shin and making him let go, then grabbed him and threw him into the other one. when he turned around the 3rd guy was on the ground, with tevin standing over him. they all got up and ran off around the corner of the building. "nice trick with that shin kick" said tevin "yea thanks." said joel "and now a whole clique hates me" "dont get mad" said tevin. "they hate me to" he said laughing "yea i noticed" said joel " and now im dragged in with you, and i repaid my favor. now you owe me" said joel. "hm. here he said" handing joel a skateboard. "i took it from a skater while he went to the bathroom" tevin said laughing "your gonna make 2 cliques mad at me!" joel said annoyed "i swear your gonna get me killed here" joel said as they walked to the boys dorm...
im working on more and will be done soon!