FanFic Questions And Comments

[Evolution]

Perhaps he is, but you'll have to wait and find out

I'm having fun writing this, I might get Leon to have quite a large presence in the game, and the Townies are sure going to get some spotlight eventually.

Just playing out some future plot lines for the Fanfic.

[BloodChuckZ]

Yeeeeaah....Dem Townies are troublemakers, all right.  I'm not done with them yet.

[Evolution]

And now, the destruction in the story shall begin.

[Le Ghost]

I like the Bryce story so far.  Maybe you should take and have the Townies catch him and take him to the Asylum, where they can torture him.

[BloodChuckZ]

Naw, that's a dumb idea, why would they want to do that when.....

No, wait.  That's a great idea.....

[Evolution]

It's a great idea, despite the fact that that Bryce is working with a Townie, and they are running away from Greasers.

But, err.... Yeah.... Quite creative, though... I guess?... I'm glad to have another reader though

Anyways, just going to write up a fight scene and get shit done.

[BloodChuckZ]

Maybe drag 'em back to Blue Balls then ? 

But seriously, just how much injuries can Bryce take before they kill him ?

[Le Ghost]

Turn Bryce into a Zombie.

[Evolution]

Heh, I already have a Fanfic for Zombies, don't need to be including that shit in this Fanfic


I had fun writing the fighting scene.

[BloodChuckZ]

Just read the last part.........Couple 'O comments....

There's no 'floor' by the bridge.
And, the area is 'run down', not 'runned down'.

[Evolution]

I meant the house, but you could say the area is run down as well, edited that one.

Also edited the slight hiccup where I put the 'Floor' bit.

Thanks.

[BloodChuckZ]

LOL, I see that a lot, calling the ground 'floor' and vice versa. One thing I keep in mind is if it's outside, usually the Ground, inside, usually the floor. 

The term 'Deck' will usually work in either case.  If the structure is like, ON a bridge, you can add the modifier 'Floor of the Bridge', but again, 'Deck' will work just a well there if not better.

[Evolution]

LOL, I see that a lot, calling the ground 'floor' and vice versa. One thing I keep in mind is if it's outside, usually the Ground, inside, usually the floor. 

Yeah, I know it was just a careless mistake, basically.  (I'll watch out for careless mistakes like that in the future)

And, is it just me, or is Community Stories pretty dead?... I mean, besides the NES... And... The silly Fanfic I'm working on now

Although, at least there is some activity, usually it's just the NES that is active.

[BloodChuckZ]

Naw, it's not you....It is near death.  But by doing these stories, you're keeping it on life support.

If I wasn't so involved in doing the NES, I could do some short stories as well, like "The Discouraged Testicle", which I wrote last summer. Once I'm done with NES, I want to do that, especially finish "A Fine Kettle Of Fish", which I started a couple years ago (about Sponge Bob coming to Bullworth).

[Evolution]

HAHAHA!!! I cracked up at the little mini-story you just did... It was, to say, pretty cool. Hehehe, you plannin' on making it a mini-story or is this just a one time thing ?