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« Reply #60 on: January 08, 2010, 06:33:50 PM »
Where do the Rockers hang out?

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« Reply #61 on: January 08, 2010, 06:48:51 PM »
At the Autoshop with the Greasers...

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« Reply #62 on: January 08, 2010, 07:21:52 PM »
But they've JUST been kicked out ! Thanks to... Tony, like always !

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« Reply #63 on: January 09, 2010, 12:21:45 PM »
Oh, and sorry Dudemann, I was finishing the part of T-Bone... You can put your post after mine if you want.

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« Reply #64 on: January 09, 2010, 08:50:11 PM »
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At the Autoshop with the Greasers...


Thanks, I'll edit that in the story.

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« Reply #65 on: January 10, 2010, 02:27:12 PM »
Please, people, this is important !

Tony has to deliver a new skirt to Pinky in the Girls Dorm, the next night.

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« Reply #66 on: January 10, 2010, 02:28:44 PM »
Oh, and for the boys who didn't get it, the term parkour is the sport himself, that includes the wallrun, the roll and other climbing skills.

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« Reply #67 on: January 10, 2010, 03:57:04 PM »
That's good to know, Mercury....I had never heard of that term before.

Posted my last before I read yours here, and forgot about Pinky....So I fixed the ending, and Tony is now headed over to the Girl's Dorm with Pinky's skirt....

He will have to sneak in or wake somebody up......

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« Reply #68 on: January 10, 2010, 04:38:56 PM »
In fact, the parkour is a french invention. I remember Tony Hawk's American Wasteland : in this game, a guy teaches you how to do wallruns, rolls... And has a very strong french accent. That's how I came up with Laurent !

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« Reply #69 on: January 10, 2010, 05:07:22 PM »
Yeah i remember that french guy in beverly hills???!!!???!!!

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« Reply #70 on: January 10, 2010, 11:26:03 PM »
I came up his name by going to look at at list of French names. That one sounded cool, so I picked it for your character...

BTW, speaking of names, where did you come up with 'Mercury' ?  You like the planet, the God, or the metal ?

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« Reply #71 on: January 11, 2010, 11:39:16 AM »
I can't remember, dude... It was a long time ago ; I should have been referring to the chemical element.

BTW, people, I need a little help to be better in story writing... I need some synonyms of the word see. Thanks !

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« Reply #72 on: January 11, 2010, 12:21:55 PM »
Here you go, Mercury.....This will give you a lot of choices for Synonyms.....

http://thesaurus.reference.com/


As to the word SEE, they have these entries.............

Main Entry:  see   Part of Speech: verb

Definition:  perceive with eyes
Synonyms:  be apprised of, beam, behold, catch a glimpse of, catch sight of, clock, contemplate, descry, detect, discern, distinguish, espy, examine, eye, flash, gape, gawk, gaze, get a load of, glare, glimpse, heed, identify, inspect, lay eyes on, look, look at, make out, mark, mind, note, notice, observe, pay attention to, peek, peep, peer, peg, penetrate, pierce, recognize, regard, remark, scan, scope, scrutinize, sight, spot, spy, stare, survey, take notice, view, watch, witness

Definition:  appreciate, comprehend
Synonyms:  appraise, ascertain, behold, catch, catch on, conceive, descry, determine, discern, discover, distinguish, envisage, envision, espy, experience, fancy, fathom, feature, feel, find out, follow, get, get the drift, get the hang of, grasp, have, hear, imagine, investigate, know, learn, make out, mark, mind, note, notice, observe, perceive, ponder, realize, recognize, remark, study, suffer, sustain, take in, think, tumble, undergo, understand, unearth, view, visualize, weigh

Definition:  accompany, guide
Synonyms:  associate with, attend, bear company, call, come by, come over, conduct, consort with, date, direct, drop by, drop in, encounter, escort, go out with, go with, keep company with, lead, look up, meet, pilot, pop in, receive, route, run into, shepherd, show, speak to, steer, stop by, stop in, take out, usher, visit, walk

Definition: visualize
Synonyms:  anticipate, conceive, divine, envisage, envision, fancy, feature, foresee, foretell, imagine, picture, realize, think, vision

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« Reply #73 on: January 11, 2010, 12:44:25 PM »
Much more as I needed, thanks alot ! Now my writing will be more pleasant ! :)

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« Reply #74 on: January 11, 2010, 01:02:33 PM »
Put that Thesaurus site on your Favorites list, and you can look up any word when you get stuck....

Real nice addition to the Girl's fight.......You got a real knack for this........:cool: