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Title: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 22, 2013, 10:56:48 PM
This is a thread for discussions on the Origins of The Bullworth Never Ending Story.   :a-cheer:
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 22, 2013, 11:01:52 PM
Yeah mate, I've been reading it a lot lately... Although I'm not completely up to date on the story, I'm at Page 29 At the moment, (Always get a computer reminder so I don't forget the page I'm up to)

Need to catch up!
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 22, 2013, 11:47:24 PM
Oh, page 29 ?  Starting Chapter 4 ? 

How'd you like the Bloodbath ?
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 12:04:42 AM
Just got to Chapter 4, that was pretty fuckin' awesome 8)
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mohamed The Kowalski on March 23, 2013, 03:26:03 AM
AH, I read it all last summer.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 03:33:27 AM
You still reading it nowadays, Moski?
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mohamed The Kowalski on March 23, 2013, 03:34:19 AM
Yes, I read it all until the last post, and when Chuck posts in it, I read.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 03:36:53 AM
Nice, I'm trying to catch up, I'm on page 30. :/
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Scum on March 23, 2013, 01:46:00 PM
My name isn't Scum and I have never read the NES.

I plan on starting to read it when I have more time. I haven't started it yet because I feel like, because it's a NES, I wouldn't ever be able to catch up on it. But I'll have plenty of free time during the spring break(starting on the 29th) and I'm actually looking forward to reading it right now.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 23, 2013, 02:10:48 PM
There WILL be an end to it, of sorts.....I've put over 3 years into it already, and I'd like to actually finish.  I only planned on 5 chapters, but Chapter 5 got so long I was forced to split it into 2 chapters, 5 & 6.  I wrote an Epilogue after 6, and that should have been that,  But I guess I couldn't help myself from adding another chapter.  And, it's been the toughest, since the main villain was beaten towards the end of Chapter 6.   Sooo....Just like Endless Summer, when I play these days, I have to get a little creative, and think, "What If....?"
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 03:11:01 PM
^ Hey, it is the Never Ending Story though, right? I guess that explains it :P
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 23, 2013, 03:14:13 PM
Yeah, well, that title was not my choice, really. 

But someone else can do NES II.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 08:11:49 PM
I think there should only be one NES to be honest, no need for a NES II, IMO.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Dave on March 23, 2013, 08:55:18 PM
It's probably awesome, but realistically, I'll never read it.

But kudos to all who put in so much time to write it.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 23, 2013, 08:57:39 PM
Psh  :neen:

You mean Chuck  :ajajaxh5:
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Dave on March 24, 2013, 01:28:46 AM
Chuck did a lot, but there were others who helped too.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on March 24, 2013, 01:31:27 AM
True dat.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Scum on March 24, 2013, 10:44:17 AM
<Discussion revival team.>

We've noticed that the current discussion of the NES has been basically terminated with the final post agreeing to the previous one without adding anything else. So we've sent an agent of ours to stop the conversation from dying.


I've never thought about this but. How was the idea of the NES born anyway?
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 24, 2013, 01:07:51 PM
It was Mercury's idea to began the story.  Tony, Laurent, and Jake were his characters.  The first post sat for 3 weeks without a reply, then 'Miss Ordered' (who wasn't around long, shame cuz they was a good writer) replied, then some others did too.  I joined in on the third page.  Near the end of Chapter 1, I began to see the potential of the story, and Mercury and I exchanged many Emails regarding the direction of the story. 
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Dave on March 24, 2013, 02:35:01 PM
It was the birth of the B-B story publishing company.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Scum on March 24, 2013, 03:50:20 PM
I've read some of the first part. And that's pretty cool.

Thanks for the info, Chuck.

You too, Dave. I guess. P:
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on March 24, 2013, 09:17:01 PM
Parts of Chapter 1 are a disorganized mess.  I've re-edited and added about 9,000 words for better story transition in the edited version, which is not posted here (or anywhere).
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on April 19, 2013, 08:06:31 AM
<Discussion revival team.>

We've noticed that the current discussion of the NES has been basically terminated with the final post agreeing to the previous one without adding anything else. So we've sent an agent of ours to stop the conversation from dying.


Slight bump, but this made me laugh.

Anyways, to continue the convo... Chuck, HOW U SO CREATIVE?... Are you ever 'Inspired' by other pieces of work, or is it all just from the big brain you have up there?...  And, it's a damn shame that Merc himself is too busy being a 'Workout Freak' to bother going on BB, it'd be interesting for him to look at the story that he was largely responsible for creating... Where is that little french dude nowadays anyhow?
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on April 19, 2013, 08:32:19 AM
I think he left finally because of hormones and a girl....Just a guess.  I haven't heard from him in a long time.  I wish him well, however, in whatever he's doing now.  He should be in a University by now, I'd guess.

Initially, I wasn't going to join in on the story....I saw it as most any other FanFic, that it would peter out in time.  But, I put a post in I thought would be funny (about Tony stuffing Kurt into a trash can), and it just kinda went from there.

In Bully though, I had a unique opportunity, as I love the game, and had previously spent a great deal of time scouting out "Where Jimmy Can't Be Busted" as a personal project in the original PS 2 game, making a comprehensive list of such.  So, I already had a working knowledge of all the areas of the game, plus most of the characters were already laid out and defined to a certain extent. 

My favorite author has always been King, who is a master of multiple character storylines and plots (aka "The Stand", "Under The Dome" and such).  I was really fascinated by the prospect of not only the school, but the towns themselves.  How does such corruption exist and thrive in a setting such as this ?  Isolated as it was, there had to be a deeper story there, some way to explain it.  And, some way to bring it all crashing down.   
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mercury on May 05, 2013, 10:57:53 AM
Man, I'm gonna cry.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on May 05, 2013, 12:45:05 PM
MERCURY !!!!

Where the Hell you been, Fella ?

[Edit....Welp, he's gone again.  I hope he's doing well.]
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mercury on May 05, 2013, 02:19:15 PM
A random Google search remembered me of Bully Board. I'm really happy to see it's still active - and that this game can still motivate so much people.

I've been studying psychology this year. This is something that I really enjoy.

I've been through some of my first NES posts for the sake of nostalgia... And I have to say, whoa, my English skills were terrible !
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on May 05, 2013, 06:32:29 PM
Yes, they were, but I've fixed them in the edited edition, which I'm planning to post over again as Edits.

Drop by more often, read the rest of the story !   See how far Tony and the gang have come.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on May 06, 2013, 02:58:24 AM
Man, I'm gonna cry.

Ahh, welcome back. (And goodbye as you won't be coming back within 3-6 years anyways)
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mercury on May 06, 2013, 04:15:39 AM
I see you've been busy writing, Chuck !
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on May 06, 2013, 07:49:20 AM
Yeah, well I'm on the final chapter.  See what you got me into ?
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mercury on May 06, 2013, 01:05:39 PM
Yeah, i really admire that, Chuck !
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mohamed The Kowalski on May 08, 2013, 08:31:18 AM
MERCURY!!!!!!!!!!!

I really wanted to hear from you. You may not know me, I'm new to the board, but I know about you. You're a great person and a genius to come up with the idea of the NES, and Chuck is a genius for completing it. Welcome back! My name is Mohamed, they call me Mo.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Evolution on May 08, 2013, 08:42:17 AM
Actually, I believe Mercury AND Chuck came up with the idea for the NES. So the accolade, 'Genius', can go to both of them.  :euro:

Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mohamed The Kowalski on May 08, 2013, 02:27:34 PM
Oh, I didn't mean to ccompliment Mercury and not compliment Chuck, Chuck is a genius, of course!
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on May 08, 2013, 11:49:32 PM
Of Course.  :laugh:   :laugh:
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mercury on May 10, 2013, 07:10:44 AM
Hey Mohamed - nice to meet you !
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Mohamed The Kowalski on May 21, 2013, 05:04:55 PM
Nice to meet you too, Mercury.
I hope you stay in this board and never leave again.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on May 21, 2013, 11:16:37 PM
Bout time you got back Mo.  Got some catching up to do.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Le Ghost on August 26, 2013, 06:14:02 AM
I have gotten catched up, so far.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on September 25, 2013, 09:37:10 PM
How about now ?  We are entering the final stretch, the last battle is soon to come. 
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Red Blaster on October 03, 2013, 07:32:37 AM
Vicious bitches, hahaha.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on October 03, 2013, 07:42:16 PM
Didn't know she had it in her....Very Artistic, I thought.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: Red Blaster on October 05, 2013, 12:02:25 PM
I just noticed that this is Story Origins, not Comments. Oh well.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on October 05, 2013, 05:42:03 PM
It's all good....I get the story confused with the real Bullworth quite often.   :laugh:
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on January 31, 2014, 02:06:13 PM
Four months down the road.....

Well, I will say this again, and with certainty...This will be the final chapter.
Expect about another 50K words or so, and it will all be over for Tony & the gang.
I will run out of Summer by the close of Chapter 9.
All the Villains have been defeated.
Now to build a safer Bullworth.
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: johnny1248 on September 10, 2014, 04:51:21 PM
You know what it would be great Chuck ? Is to have a massive dramatic finale that it will literally hold our breath
Title: Re: NES Story Origins
Post by: BloodChuckZ on September 10, 2014, 07:59:23 PM
I'll probably go out with a whimper.....All the big Villains have been defeated. 
Lots of small Villains left to clear up though.
Enough for 40k more words ?  Maybe.
Only 1 month to go in the Bullworth Summer.
Then, it's done done.